[fic] the song remains the same [28/?]

[leonhart_17]

Title: The Song Remains the Same
Rating: M
Spoilers: 8x13
Summary: I had a dream. Crazy dream. Ellis Grey is alive and well. Seattle Grace is the premiere hospital in the country. Callie Torres is married to Owen Hunt, with a home and three children, while Arizona Robbins does who and whatever she pleases. The history is different, the world itself

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[ext_1614268]

Yeah, ressick's gif sums it up. Lord you know how to get me emotional. What a gorgeous piece of writing this chapter was. I adore Allegra and Arizona's relationship. I mean, I like Arizona with all the kids, but her bond with Allegra... siiiigh. They just feel like such a family. I love how it's coming together.

[leonhart_17]

That gif is mean! I'm glad you liked it. It's tough being the only girl too, so they can relate on that as well as the losses. I'm glad you liked it. I went back over it and added to that because I know you wanted some more Arizona/Allegra :) Thank you! I love it too!

[ext_1614268]

That was sweet of you. It's also a sign of your writing skill that you can do that without the story seeming choppy. Too often when authors do that they lose control of the story and it becomes like a choose your own adventure mess. You never make that mistake. I think it's because you take time to think where it reasonably fits.

[leonhart_17]

:) Well you're always so thoughtful, it seemed like the least I could do for you.

[ext_1614268]

Awww... thanks. *Blushing.*

I just figure there's no reason to be rude to people. It takes a lot of courage to try to write... the least I can do as a reader is be encouraging and constructive.