FIC- Veronica Mars (Veronica, Vinnie, Mac, Dick) 1/1

[leobrat]

Title: Words Of Wisdom
Author: ashleigh (leobrat)
Pairing/Characters: Veronica/Vinnie, Mac/Dick
Word Count: 2286
Rating: pg-13/r-ish...no graphic language, but there are adult situations
Summary: How else would Veronica end up in Vinnie Vanlowe’s Shaggin’ Wagon?
Spoilers: Through Mars, Bars, but mostly AU
Disclaimer: I own nothing, and am not affiliated

Comments

[monimala]

Ashleigh, this would be faaaabulous if 90% of the dialogue weren't missing quotation marks and some of your other punctuation hadn't run for the hills.

Your Veronica and Vinnie voices were great. I loved the narrative set-up of Big Dick being back in town...it felt very much like a noir voice-over. And I loved Vinnie pulling all the random shit out of various places in the van. The last line? PERFECT. This was priceless! Just decide if you want quotation marks or you don't, because it's not consistent. :-). There's also some other comma placement and apostrophe placement stuff going on.

[leobrat]

Ah, shit, I *hate* when that happens...And I'm not sure why it did...Sometimes I'm blind in the morning.

Weirdness, don't blame shealynn88, sometimes it just happens when I copy and paste from word (and then again, sometimes it doesn't...ah, the joys...)

And also, thank you for reading!

[monimala]

I was going to say...Shealynn suddenly turned into the WORST BETA EVER. LOL. (Watch, she'll see this comment and throw something at me.)

And you're welcome! It was just the smile I needed this morning.

[leobrat]

Well, glad to have helped!

[shealynn88]

A hunch was like a cold, once it caught in the air, it would go around town in a matter of hours.

Ha! Love that!

The end was hysterical! And I dunno why, but the 'Cupcake' thing just kills me. :)

And Vinnie giving her advice...HA! But awesome! The changes are great, and the story is great. Yay! There should be more Vinnie/V in this world!

[leobrat]

The cupcake thing is one of my favorite parts!

And it wouldn't be the same without you, so thank you!

[leobrat]

Hee, thank you! I like the last line too!

[blahla_chica]

that was awesome, in a kind of creepy way, Veronica and Vinnie, it just seems so wrong... and a little bit funny.
good job, really enjoyed :)

[leobrat]

Hee, it was meant to be more funny than sexy. Glad you enjoyed!

[pixelarious]

Hee! I don't read much Mac/Dick anymore, but yours was great- v true to how they might come together (aheh). And of course, LOVED the Vinnie.

[leobrat]

And have I mentioned that that icon is made of win?

Thank you for reading!