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leobrat

FIC- Friday Night Lights (Santiago, Matt, Tim)

Jan 12, 2008 12:03

Aaaaand we're back...

Title: No Wisdom In Flying Under The Radar
Rating: r (Santiago swears a lot in this one)
Word Count: 1,247
Summary: It's not right, but sometimes it feels good to put a little fear in someone... (Part VI in the Permission To Exist series)
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

( For the first time, he's not looking over at Julie Taylor every four seconds... )

tv discussion, fic: friday night lights, santiago herrera, fanfiction, story: permission to exist, tv: friday night lights

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leobrat January 12 2008, 17:38:27 UTC

Hee. The whole idea was always to make it a Santiago/Julie/Matt triangle. Tim will be more on the sidelines, playing referee, so to speak.

lalagirl33 January 12 2008, 21:29:41 UTC

AWESOME!

this is reaaalllyyyyy goood!!

leobrat January 12 2008, 22:13:35 UTC

Thank you!

thatdudejoe January 12 2008, 22:46:13 UTC

Now things are reallllllly getting interesting. I like it!!

leobrat January 12 2008, 23:15:08 UTC

Yes, I'm definitely building towards something, you'll just have to wait and see!

hope27 January 13 2008, 03:06:04 UTC

Yay! You already know I love this, but I just had to say it again!!

He leans back in his chair and it’s like he physically senses when Julie Taylor is looking at him. She’s wearing something sort of low cut- how the hell does Coach let her out of the house like that- and she’s got some sort of lip gloss stuff on. It makes him stare at her mouth, and that’s already getting him in trouble. She smiles at him, and his stomach does a little flip and he just turns back to the boys at the table.

But that didn’t go unnoticed. “I mean it, Five-Nine,” Riggins says, all joking aside.

Saracen’s staring at him good and hard. If he wasn’t paying attention before, he sure is now.

This whole last part is still one of my favorite parts...hehe, way to go Tim...let everyone know why don't you?

Great job, hon! :)

leobrat January 13 2008, 14:18:58 UTC

Yes! Glad people enjoyed, even though there wasn't really any Juliago interaction.

Hee, you're really loving Tim/Julie lately, arentcha?

hope27 January 13 2008, 21:22:46 UTC

Yeah, for some reason I am just really liking their dynamic on the show. I don't know why exactly, but I like their relationship. I seriously don't think I've seen Tim talk that much with someone, but Julie seemed to get him to talk and smile. Just an interesting observation.

Although, what I'm really craving are some good Tyra/Timmy scenes...I'm tired of Tyra only having scenes with Landry. I miss Tyra/Tim! :)

k4writer02 January 15 2008, 00:30:06 UTC

You continued this! What a nice thing to come home to after a long day. I really like that you haven't forgotten just how awful the dynamic inside that classroom has to be--for everyone. Julie's running away, Barnett is running scared, Santiago is seething, and (i imagine) so is Matt. Is Riggins in there too ( ... )

leobrat January 15 2008, 01:15:06 UTC

Yes, yes, yes! You're seeing everything I'm trying to convey (which makes me incredibly proud!)

Also, in some future installment, I would really appreciate seeing the party-boy from the English class interact with Santiago, Matt, Riggins, or some combination thereof. Not to ask for too much--

Not too much to ask for, at all. In fact, it's totally coming. This show is making it so easy for me to fill Santiago's thoughts, though I totally have other ideas that are all mine, that I need to get to, at some point.

k4writer02 January 15 2008, 02:52:46 UTC

Whee--glad I could make your day good by noticing what you're putting out there. And yay to future installments--I'll be on the lookout! Do you mind if I friend you?

leobrat January 15 2008, 02:56:05 UTC

Oh, of course not! Friending you back as well!