You know I can't moderate it if you don't submit it, right? :P
Sorry if we're being 'slow', but one of us has been on vacation, one of us now has tendonitis in her hand and I work, jsyk.
So as to save time later I'll tell you now: This kind of quoting is right; “Alone at last,” Bill whispered, with the comma, but it should also be like that on the other ones like statutory rape.” He said loudly. with a comma and whatever word comes next, like 'he' with a lower case letter. haha I have so many memories of being rejected by slashatthedisco for that, you have no idea lol :)
It'll be cool if you continued this though, I like it.
ha i haven't submitted this one yet because i have another one in moderation already. it's really not a big deal i don't mind that much. i was just being difficult haha. but thanks i appreciate it! i'll go change it now.
No, you don't. Sorry dude but you must be confused or have forgotten one got submitted/rejected b/c there's nothing in the queue. Though if you submit it as it is right now it'll be rejected.
I'm approving it but the word after the comma such as "statutory rape,” He said loudly" and "Gabe,” The younger man" should really be lower case like 'he' instead of 'He'. and 'the' instead etc. other than that its all fine, obv :)
Sorry if we're being 'slow', but one of us has been on vacation, one of us now has tendonitis in her hand and I work, jsyk.
So as to save time later I'll tell you now: This kind of quoting is right; “Alone at last,” Bill whispered, with the comma, but it should also be like that on the other ones like statutory rape.” He said loudly. with a comma and whatever word comes next, like 'he' with a lower case letter. haha I have so many memories of being rejected by slashatthedisco for that, you have no idea lol :)
It'll be cool if you continued this though, I like it.
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it's called "you've been on my mind"
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other than that its all fine, obv :)
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