Comments | lennykk123: If you wanna hit the floor

lennykk123

If you wanna hit the floor - are you ready for more? 1/?

Jul 30, 2008 20:25

Your voice echoes across the large room. My heart starts to speed up and with the acoustics of the room, I’m afraid you’ll hear and know how I feel.
Because whenever I see you I get lost in your beautiful face. I wish I was right next to you, able to drink in your scent.
I realize I’m staring and so do you. It’s not long before we’re the only ( Read more... )

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burntheghosts July 31 2008, 22:45:54 UTC

That was awesome!
You captured the emotions really well.

burntheghosts July 31 2008, 22:46:14 UTC

FC! \o/

lennykk123 July 31 2008, 22:48:02 UTC

thank you so much! im really glad you liked it!
hope you check back for part 2

stronger_now_x July 31 2008, 23:11:28 UTC

Aww bb! You didn't have to dedicate this to me! That's so sweet. :) I like this a lot though, really. So unique. Love love love. <3

lennykk123 July 31 2008, 23:13:09 UTC

you see the dedication??
it is staying the same!
you deserve it. and just keep writing YOUR story! i need to know what happens next

stronger_now_x July 31 2008, 23:24:39 UTC

Haha aww, I am bb, I just have a slight writer's block right now. That's what happens when you don't finish a story before posting it. :P The next part should be up hopefully soon though. :)

monimi101 August 30 2008, 20:00:01 UTC

Oh! I totally feel this. And I like it. @_@

lennykk123 August 30 2008, 20:15:26 UTC

thank you!