Comments | leni_jess: FIC for Severus's birthday: Ticked Off (Severus/allsorts, but PG13)

leni_jess

FIC for Severus's birthday: Ticked Off (Severus/allsorts, but PG13)

Jan 10, 2010 16:50

Title Ticked Off
Author Leni Jess (leni_jess)
Pairings Severus/quite a few people, at different times (go on, be brave, none of it's explicit)
Summary Severus keeps lists.
Rating PG13, perhaps
Warnings Probably not nearly as much smut as you would have liked; it's hinted at rather than depicted (see rating)
Word-count ~1000 words
Author's Notes It's still ( Read more... )

fic by leni_jess

Comments 15

bethbethbeth January 10 2010, 06:24:18 UTC

Severus Snape was a happy and fulfilled man; what was vengeance, after that?

Amen to that.

leni_jess January 10 2010, 07:12:57 UTC

Thanks, Beth! If you liked it, that's good.

bethbethbeth January 10 2010, 11:46:58 UTC

I did! Anything that makes Severus this happy is loved by me. :)

shiv5468 January 10 2010, 11:05:43 UTC

Squeees

Kinky but... yes, I think that's how it should be. He needs to amek up for lost time.

leni_jess January 10 2010, 12:13:45 UTC

Severus needs not only to make up for lost time but, it seems to me, to find out what he likes! (And to get good at it. He's the sort of bloke who works at it.)

iulia_linnea January 10 2010, 13:14:07 UTC

After that the thing developed a rhythm of its own, and Severus added names to the list on the basis of his own wishes, not just where he thought the odds were good.

That is the most hopeful, cheering line! And I thoroughly enjoyed reading this; it’s lovely. :D

leni_jess January 10 2010, 21:04:10 UTC

Thank you! I realised afterwards that without consciously intending it I'd moved his attitude from reactive to proactive, as well as allowing him hope and enjoyment. My subconscious was certainly on a roll yesterday!

ellid January 10 2010, 13:34:59 UTC

Nice. I really like that he finally finds some peace and contentment.

leni_jess January 10 2010, 21:05:12 UTC

We all want that for him, since JKR never got around to it. Thanks.

flaminia_x January 10 2010, 16:41:40 UTC

Oh, how nice. I like being able to think of Lucius and Narcissa as occasionally thoughtful and loving people, even if it is in a kinky and twisted way. :) And although I actually do like Ron, I sometimes have a problem with thinking of him as incredibly ... gifted ... in certain arenas, so I'm quite glad that Hermione found herself a tutor! Nice job!

leni_jess January 10 2010, 21:09:48 UTC

There's no doubt the Malfoys have their own interpretation of moral and social imperatives! But their fierce love for their son suggests they can, when they choose, be thoughtful and loving. As for poor Ron - maybe having Hermione walk out would be a wake-up call. He's so immature in canon, even after everything that happened, and there's no doubt that he and Hermione appear woefully unsuited to each other. Which means massive effort to make the marriage work. She seems the type to undertake it; him - well, I'm not so sure.

Thanks for your comments!