[One-shot] Unofficial Rites

[lenas_ill_fame]

Title: Unofficial Rites
Rating: NC-17 (contains lemon)
Pairing: Yuri/Wolfram
Genre: Romance (serious WAFF warning, people!)
Chapter: One-shot
Request: Romance, Smut, Seme!Yuri
Summary: On the night before their wedding, Yuri arranges to spend some time alone with Wolfram. Lemon and WAFF ensues. ~_^
Comments: Minimal spoilers; just know who Greta

Comments

[lenas_ill_fame]

^_^ Yes, that's definitely fluff. ^^ I'm glad you liked it!

I try to give each story it's own "flavor": a new take on the relationship. I really try to make each story unique...sometimes it works, sometimes not. ^_^ Wolfram's character especially is something I play around with a lot because he's such a multilayered character.

Thanks again! ^^

[a_yell]

Awesome fluff. Fluff w/o making readers puke is what I'd call this (up to the point whereupon Yuuri makes his love speech, though - he never stood out to me as particularly articulate, but whatever).

In character as always, and wonderfully written. This is lengthy without dragging and wordy without being long-winded. Very nice. ^^

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[sayoko_bizen]

well it's been five years down story timeline. by then if Yuuri hadnt learned to be a bit more precise in his expression, he'd have to have been a moron. lol.

yay Yuuri!

[chalp]

Cute!! I love fluff! It makes me go "awwww....". That's so sweet of Yuuri ^^
I really like your writing style!

Mmmmmush pile!! ^_^

[fantasy_of_mab]

A different style to your Fountain story but just as good. Yes, the tears have stopped and after reading this I feel so much happier. I guess nothing a good lemon can’t cure huh? ^_^

How do you do it? How do you make your characters so alive that their pain is mine, their happiness puts a smile on my face, their anger burns inside me… and its not even your creative baby, but you’ve made all your own, I think in a way not many fanfic writers can say. Perhaps the characters are Tomo Takabayashi, but their emotions are truly yours. Thank you

Re: Mmmmmush pile!! ^_^

[lenas_ill_fame]

I'm...speechless. I don't know how to thank you for this review, it is the best compliment you could possibly give me! *blushing*

Thank you so much! &hearts

[war_goddess69]

liked this one very much