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lenageek

The Right to Love - Part 7

Dec 28, 2010 02:08

Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love's Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: R for ( Read more... )

fan fic, pepa/silvia

Comments 13

bsofthewest December 28 2010, 13:22:10 UTC

You have added a great mystery to a great story. Loving it!

lenageek December 30 2010, 11:43:00 UTC

Thanks! I hope I can keep the suspense/mystery part going! It's a toughie to write but great fun!

pepsilove64 December 28 2010, 17:24:27 UTC

Thanks for the great update!
I think I hate Trujillo :)
Have a Happy New Year!

lenageek December 30 2010, 11:44:10 UTC

You're welcome!

I'm having great fun writing Trujillo as an asshole - he's not done with PepSi by a long shot!

Happy New Year to you as well!

ur5amaj0r December 31 2010, 04:41:22 UTC

“You know Trujillo, you sure are hung up on sex. Not that you’d know anything about it since rumor has it you pop pills for erectile dysfunction like candy.”

Nice one Pepa! Great shot at the jerk.

“Well Miranda, I think you must have learned from the best when it comes to not following protocol. If Inspectora Castro had called in for backup that night she was stupid enough to go alone against Uriarte's men, she wouldn’t have lost her baby now, would she?”

Ok, I'm officially so f***ing hate Trujillo right now. Can I do everyone a favour & shoot him?

And the mystery & suspense! I'm at the edge of my seat right now! :)

lenageek December 31 2010, 09:40:58 UTC

Nice one Pepa! Great shot at the jerk.

Heh - I figure that if we see so many damn erectile dysfunction commercials in the US, I could make it a joke!

Ok, I'm officially so f***ing hate Trujillo right now. Can I do everyone a favour & shoot him?

No, not yet! ;D There's a lot more animosity between Pepa and Trujillo to come - I love writing those parts. But I'll see what I can come up with to have Pepa get the upper hand...

Thanks for reading!

ur5amaj0r January 4 2011, 15:26:40 UTC

Ah, so I can't shoot him yet. No probs. As long as Pepa got the upper hand over this jerk, then it's all fine with me. :)

szairmz February 15 2011, 13:49:04 UTC

Lena, will you please clock Trujillo's bloody nose with Pepa's magnum?!!!!
Hopefully that will fucking shut him up.

lenageek February 15 2011, 16:13:56 UTC

Heh - don't worry about Trujillo. He will do a lot worse and Pepa will do a lot more than clock him once I'm finished with this story!

szairmz February 15 2011, 17:10:24 UTC

By the way, have you seen this:
http://www.antena3.com/videos/impares-premium/temporada-1/capitulo-8.html
Laura is in it!!!
I think she plays the ex-wife, and meeting her ex'es new beau.
Gotta see her reaction, I laughed out loud.
Didn't understand a word, but she's ridiculously cute, and gorgeous, I must add.
Why don't you just put this up in your journal since you have a bigger following.

lenageek February 15 2011, 19:41:54 UTC

I saw it yesterday - so cute! I would faint if I was the other woman being introduced to an ex who is Laura Sanchez! ;p

I didn't understand a word either, but I loved Laura's overdramatic crying fit - I giggled myself senseless! I should post it to the comm since it's pretty quiet these days.

szairmz February 15 2011, 23:36:42 UTC

Yes! Post! Post! Post!
Anywhere, and AE if you can.
I can hear my own heartbeat over there, pretty eerie.

This woman gets to me, every single time.
Have you seen her latest appearance at SIMOF 2011?
That was some intensed moment, she was so clearly frustrated, but I think someone made a remark to make her laugh somehow.

And in Pasalabra, how cuter can Laura get?
She is so infectiously giggly, I've watched that video countless of times, which a huge grin plastered on my face, everytime.