[12] light up my world

Jul 03, 2012 00:34

light up my world
Pairing: Jonghyun x Key
Rating: pg
Word Count: 2823w
Summary: The school jock was known to be a big flirt, but Kibum couldn't help but like him. Just a bit. 
Notes:  Prompt from jongkeykink. It turned out much more fluffy than I intended. Much longer too. Warnings for homophobic school bullying. Also cheesy One Direction lyrics.

If only you saw what I can see. )

pairing: jongkey, rating:pg, fandom:shinee

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_keepthebeat July 3 2012, 18:03:41 UTC
YOU FINISHED IT!! \o/

Now, every week Jonghyun would strut around school with a new girlfriend by his side and his ever growing following trailing behind. The boy knew he was loved and thrived on attention. Smiling cheekily, he would whisper pretentious poetry in his girlfriend’s ears, gently draping his letterman jacket over her slim form as she giggled girlishly.

"Ugh I can't believe I used to find him cute, he's so annoying," muttered Kibum as he randomly scribbled a flower on a newspaper photo of Lee Taemin.

Can I just say that one of my favorite things about this was the rom-com-ish "you're so gorgeous, god I hate your guts" thing you had going with Kibum? It was delightful and fun and all things people read a high school AU for, basically ( ... )

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lemon_skies July 10 2012, 02:07:17 UTC
I DID. AND NOW I AM COMMENTING.

And I wouldn't have Kibum any other way, lovingly hating on gorgeous-dumbass-Jonghyun-the-wrestler. Also I'm highly considering that idea I told you the other night ok? OK? :D

Shinee x One Direction needs to happen. I don't care, I'm making this a rule.

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stolenflower July 3 2012, 21:28:59 UTC
;.;

everything you write is gold, okay? errrthing.

i kinda love the meme now. cause you keep writing for it. XD

this is insanely adorable.

jonghyun that puppy. i need someone like you in my life. like seriously. :'(
kibum my bb~ cmere and let me huggle you~~ oh wait jonghyun's doing that nvm
minho sports prodigy~ wahhhh
jinki, that bastard. lend me your brains :3
and taemin, the school idol :D he was in the newspaper? what for? being awesome? c:

thanks so much for sharing this~~~

also, i just want to repeat that i really love your writing :D

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lemon_skies July 10 2012, 02:11:49 UTC
You are too sweet ♥

I almost hate the meme because I keep on finding prompts that I like and starting 249249 stories and not working on other things :| I meant Jonghyun to be a stereotypical shoujo manga high school crush, someone that is so attractive and perfect to Kibum that he almost isn't real. Taemin is the school idol! All he has to do is blink and he'd be featured in the newspaper.

Thank you for reading ~

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tiggie0307 July 4 2012, 07:53:49 UTC
Oh god I love this! Jonghyun singing 1D. CAN NOT UNSEE.
Kibum keeps a journal that's cute.
I also liked how Jonghyun told the Principle instead of handling it on his own.

last year I kept walking into your class by accident, and the only face that stood out from me was yours, probably because you didn't look at me like I was some sort of alien, but as a person That's so cute and LOL of course everyone else would look at him like that, its the wrong room!^^

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lemon_skies July 10 2012, 02:19:50 UTC
I really do want SHINee to cover a 1D song, it would make my year. Jonghyun, as endearingly stupid as he can be, seems to be rather sharp and even mature, I wanted to convey that in this story. That he wasn't some stereotypical high school guy that is ready to throw punches or get involved.

The reason why the girls stared at him like an alien is because he is handsome, and the guys were making awestruck faces because he is considered the epitome of cool at school. :D

Thank you for reading!

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queenofshy July 4 2012, 18:01:03 UTC
Yes, yes~ Sequel would be awesome <3

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lemon_skies July 10 2012, 03:18:41 UTC
Haha maybe I will. Maybe. And thank you for reading!

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lemon_skies July 10 2012, 03:18:23 UTC
Thank you :D

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xdenisex July 4 2012, 22:59:25 UTC
cries because jongkey and one direction and jonghyun singing one direction just keep being an asshole huh

omg this was so cute whalkdnsslthnghnf AND THE LETTERMAN JACKET IDK I LOVE LETTERMAN JACKETS WHEN THEYRE INVOLVED IN LITTLE HIGH SCHOOL AUS LIKE THIS GOD

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lemon_skies July 10 2012, 04:24:10 UTC
Not even going to lie, Jonghyun singing One Direction would be so great.

Thank you for reading!

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