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[09] wine red heart

May 13, 2012 13:29

wine red heart
Pairing: Taekey, Taemin/oc
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1651w
Summary: The story of a man who lost his heart to a beautiful boy.
Notes: Don't read if easily squicked. Be warned for death.

( The man was first attracted to the boy’s long silky hair and willowy body. )

rating:nc-17, pairing: taekey, fandom:shinee

Comments 28

linnhe May 13 2012, 21:50:35 UTC

let me list my favourite parts

key scratching at an itchy spot on his face and smearing food in the process; YES THIS IS ME ALL THE TIME WHEN I AM COOKING :|
their tattoos omggg ;; especially how key's is a cross because yas
HEARTS IN JARS. WECK JARS? CASUALLY PRETENDING THEY ARE WECK JARS CUZ SHIT NEVER GOES BAD IN A WECK LOL
lady fingers okay but no seriously is this a thing? do you make hearty meals with a biscuit?
oh and idk SERIAL KILLERS.

linnhe May 13 2012, 22:31:16 UTC

Bitten curses and quiet suckles filled the room as the man curled thick fingers into the other’s long hair. The boy, all milky limbs and red lips, peered up at him through his fringe. A pair of dark wet eyes blinked teasingly up at his customer, eager for approval. The man groaned and not-so-gently slid the plush mouth off his cock; his fat thumbs brushed bruised lips, wiped at stray droplets of precum before eagerly flipping the boy over on his stomach.

excuse me while i roll around in this

lemon_skies May 14 2012, 07:43:12 UTC

hi i love you ♥

ladyfingers can refer to the sponge cake OR it is another name for egyptian okra.

sits happily on you. still don't know how to porn but i'm getting better. i'm glad you liked it ;~;

simneesee May 14 2012, 02:24:13 UTC

This was very well-written and i LOVE that it was TaeKey!!

lemon_skies May 14 2012, 07:44:05 UTC

thank you for reading! :D

miinah_324 May 14 2012, 04:08:50 UTC

DAYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMM
that was absurdly hot, and crazy, and just nfffttt
Taemin is a sexy-ass serial killer, and TaeKey is just glorious ;D
thanks for sharing~!

lemon_skies May 14 2012, 07:45:27 UTC

Shinee fandom needs more crazy fic! Thank you for reading :D

hazellicious May 14 2012, 04:33:58 UTC

reading something like this straight after getting out of bed
WELL AT LEAST I'M VERY MUCH AWAKE NOW

at first i was like boy~ why you so easy
then i was like - wait maybe he'll, like steal all minho's money, steal everything cuz that would make sense maybe but not really (i should not try to type when i'm sleepy wat is english)
and of course, i didn't notice the pairing cuz i had opened a ton of fics to read before my lecture-thingy and was just chewing my way through them

BUT THEN
the key tattoo - then i was like wat happened to key why is key's possession being all slutty taemin go back to key now
AND THEN BOOM?!
....................... okay, DID not see that one coming

and key's just casually being a cannibal and cooking up a bloody stew, LITERALLY bloody stew
KEY WHY DO YOU SMELL LIKE ANOTHER MAN
i thought he was making ladyfinger stew, hm
(thank god i'm a vegetarian tbh)

oh and then they have sex and they literally collect hearts ( ... )

hazellicious May 14 2012, 04:35:44 UTC

oh and excuse me while i sing "jar of hearts" the whole day

hazellicious May 14 2012, 04:37:48 UTC

AND I JUST REALIZED THAT THERE WAS NO MINHO IN THIS STORY
(is it weird that my brain immediately replaced the OC with minho)

anyway, just saying, the guy's definitely minho in my mind, yep

... i should just go before i start sounding creepy .____.

lemon_skies May 14 2012, 07:55:49 UTC

Haha! Well, if it does make you feel better, I started this with 2min in mind, but then changed it to some oc after I decided that I wasn't in the mood to kill off Minho.

Are there actual lady fingers in that stew? Or is Kibum just making food out of the little spongecakes? Who knows? Also, Key smells like another man because he had an appointment earlier with a policeman. :) He didn't bother washing up after his little date. Heartbreaker, that one.

I'm glad you liked this! I had a lot of fun writing it because I kind of really enjoy stories with a gory twist to them.

I wrote this! If anyone should get out it's me!!

fonulyn May 14 2012, 12:15:31 UTC

the ending is just ridiculously hot. like. way too hot.

and collecting hearts! wow! I didn't see that coming XD

lemon_skies May 14 2012, 23:59:13 UTC

I have a secret love for serial killer Taemin, I must admit. I decided to pair that with my kink of seeing Key bossed around and voila. I'm so happy you liked this! I'm a silent lurker of your stories, I admit ;; It makes me happy that someone that I like likes my stuff ;; ty for the comment

Heartbreakers and heart collectors. Those two :3

♥

fonulyn May 15 2012, 06:05:23 UTC

I never knew I had a thing for serial killer Taemin but turns out I apparently do, haha. and seeing Key bossed around is pretty much my favorite kink~

and thank you :3 I'm glad to hear you like my writings too! mutual appreciation is the best :)

also I forgot to say (I was so tired last night, haha) that the mentioning of their tattoos was just incredibly hot. like, marking each other in a kind of subtle way! plus "he gasped, catlike eyes closing as the brunette slid a slick finger into him." favorite sentence ;-;

I JUST REALIZED: twenty-two jars? lmao, they've been busy!

lemon_skies May 19 2012, 02:16:03 UTC

I never knew I had a thing for Serial Killer Taemin, but then Lucifer happened :x Key being bossed around is a fairly new kink, mostly driven by their newer interviews where everyone talks about teasing/bossing Key around.

The tattoos were actually put in at last minute, I like subtle tattoos and I thought it'd be so sensual if they both had tiny ones that remind them of each other.

they've been very busy :3