[02] S'eteint Le Soleil

[lemon_skies]

S'eteint Le Soleil (The sun goes out)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 679w
Summary: Sometimes Key manages to delude himself on where he is and what he's doing. But then he is pulled back into reality.
a/n: Deleted scene from Y en A un de Trop, this would make the most sense if you've read that, but you don't necessarily have to. I initially cut this

Comments

[personified]

omg... i loved this! maybe it was a little put offi-sh with the ending but it was well-written with the differently proportioned feelings. thank you!

[lemon_skies]

Thank you!

[itsjustjodie]

This is soo good!

[lemon_skies]

Thank you!

[imvus]

I appreciate how you separated this from the other part. Key extremely...ugghh... I hate to say it but sexy as hell in the beginning.

But of course the "investor" had to ruin it.

I will be looking forward to more of your writing, (including the smut) :)

(I'm just going to pretend in my mind that the beginning part was minkey...okay?)

[lemon_skies]

Of course the investor had to ruin it. Haha. I meant for the story to start out sensual and change into something more sinister.

Thank you ♥

[fikshnaddiction]

LOVED this concept. it really showed through bc of your astounding writing skills tbh

[shayvanwinkle]

this was so nice ah my tummy is all flippy. i really liked how you described key's feelings, it made me feel them and it was soft and sad and lovely. thanks for sharing this i can't wait to read more of your stuff ^^

[lemon_skies]

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed ;;

[fikshnaddiction]

ugh perfect perfect but so so so sad.