[SPN]: The one hundred and forty-four thousand people of Israel.

Nov 18, 2009 23:47


6203 words
Gen AU/ R.
Warnings for temporary character death and foul language.
Disclaimer: only the original character is mine. wishful thinking does not create ownership.

Author’s notes: Finally finished after what I think has been a year. An interruption to “flow” triggered a severe writer’s block on the character, and I hope it doesn’t show ( Read more... )

fic: 144000 people, gen, fic, supernatural

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nitro26 November 18 2009, 18:33:57 UTC
Wow. That was really really good. I'm always a little on the fence about OCs, but you made it work so well. Your attention to detail and how you set the scene for the apocalypse was fantastic and that part towards the end with Dean patching Sam up? LOVE. <333 I really enjoyed this. Thank you. :) *adds to mems*

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lemanya November 18 2009, 23:43:16 UTC
Golly, thanks!
I know what you mean about OC's, I'm always a little iffy about them, so I'm really glad it worked for you.
And you're so very much welcome!
<3

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pizzapixie November 19 2009, 01:15:52 UTC
Such an intense story with an awesome narrator's voice. You made me feel every nuance, every visceral emotion. That seldom happens. Thank you so much.

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lemanya November 19 2009, 01:44:53 UTC
No no, thank you.
I'm glad it worked that way for you, and that you enjoyed it so much.

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keerawa November 19 2009, 07:03:08 UTC
Wow. That was really, really good. I loved your half-crazy (but who can blame him) narrator. Frankie and Castiel's buttons mad eme laugh out loud. Such a distinctly more positive view of the end of the world then in 5.04.

And now I'm terribly curious about who this near silent listener might be, who doesn't know about the Winchesters, has foudn safety, and plans to move on in the morning.

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lemanya November 19 2009, 09:03:50 UTC
Thanks so much. Castiel's buttons made me laugh too the first time I read it through. I was like "that's hilarious! why do I not remember writing that?"

And honestly, I have no clue who the listener is. My best guess is someone who's been travelling alone for too long without long rests that they haven't picked up any information that would have made the rounds, simply because they keep moving.

But I can't even say for sure that's who they are. Characters are elusive sometimes.

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faunaana November 23 2009, 12:42:10 UTC
Just to let you know, we've recced this in this week's crack_impala found here. =D

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lemanya November 23 2009, 12:45:25 UTC
Oh my god, really?
*faints*
That's like, the biggest compliment ever. Thank you so much.

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lemanya November 24 2009, 02:54:14 UTC
Thank you so much, it was my pleasure. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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