Fears 1/? [Sakuraiba]

[lelaeworld]

I really want improve my english, for this I decide write fanfic in this lenguage, but, i dont am sure if are understand. Please be patient ^^
Title: fears
Author: me 8D
Pairing: Sakuraiba
Genre: romantic, angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The fears of Sho can be more hard than his feelings?

Comments

[arashiislove]

your english is a little confusing at times,
but it sounds interesting ^^

[lelaeworld]

*-* thanks 4 reading!
and I promise improve in the next chap 8D

[arashiislove]

if you want i can do a little beta, i have never done it before, but i am a native english speaker... (if that helps any :P)

[lelaeworld]

oh oh oh...hontou?!!

YES!!!

i need much help xD

please

please be my beta! 8D

of new!

thanks thanks!

[faradakiut]

everything can be improved~
ur english r still understandable~~
and i, myself also still learning~
lets do our best, ne~

p/s: i suggest u to find a beta to discuss this but its totally up to u~ ^_^

[lelaeworld]

thanks for your words! ;-;
I promise to improve for the next chapter! 8D
but ... I do not understand that is beta ...
^ _ ^'
gomen!

[faradakiut]

beta is a person who will check ur grammar and spelling~

there's a community that provide it~ here:
http://community.livejournal.com/je_beta/

but if u have a friend that can beta for u that would be nice~

[lelaeworld]

thank you very much for telling me!

then I search someone help me

of new thanks you very much!

[saana_13]

it looks interesting, I like it. there were some mistakes but that's okay.
please do your best with the update;)

[lelaeworld]

thanks for read *-*

I promise doing my best in the next chap!

[lelaeworld]

thanks for read and commented *-*

[adeyakana]

it's looks interesting...
thx 4 sharing

[lelaeworld]

you are welcome!

thanks to you 4 read 8D