Yakko's World - Chapter 16 - Part C

Mar 25, 2012 18:31

Four updates, one month. Oi, I don't think I'm going to be able to keep this up.


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fuzzy_spork March 25 2012, 23:01:39 UTC
Holy crap I'm gone for a few days and you update twice?! :D I'll leave a proper comment for you tomorrow when my head's not pounding like a bass drum. *hugs*

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leilia March 26 2012, 10:02:50 UTC
*hugs*

I hope you feel better soon!

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lilycobalt March 25 2012, 23:10:14 UTC
Two quick notes:

(1) Yay Oman getting it together!
(2) I'm...glad that Liv died. I mean, not really, because I like olivethegreat and Liv was a sympathetic character. But anything else would have been a cop out.

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leilia March 26 2012, 10:14:34 UTC
1. Yay! Yeah it was time.
2. That is one thing I don't tend to do - cop out of plot. I am really grateful to OlivetheGreat for letting me do this. She really deserves thanks and more kudos than she gets

Thanks for the quick notes!

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leilia March 26 2012, 10:15:14 UTC
LOL That would be the response I was looking for!

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lauriempress March 26 2012, 15:59:23 UTC
*blinks* JACK WHY DIDN'T YOU WARN ME ABOUT THIS??? ;)

Wow, Lark. No I wasn't expecting that. If you really feel you need to the keys to the cave are in the usual place, but I don't think you'll need them.

And I really think you balanced the death with the proposal, so not too bad. Although I did sort of wonder when Onslow was going to wake up, I'll admit it.

Good job!

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leilia March 26 2012, 17:36:50 UTC
Because I totally bribed Jack with smores and cake.

I have a nice cave. It comes complete with pushy pets and lots of alcohol. Because hiding out should never be done sober or alone!

I'm glad you thought so. I really was going for that. Which is why I'd been holding off on having Oman propose for so long because I've known what I was doing to Liv for 3 years now. Onslow, he's a little dense. And he's trapped. He's also not thinking clearly because he was torn between trying to make Liv better and stopping Drea and not knowing how to do either. Or at least not knowing how to either legally. Onslow played by the rules. Drea didn't.

Thanks!

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lauriempress March 27 2012, 17:55:38 UTC
*nods* I can see all that, what I meant though, was that I thought Onslow was literally dreaming.

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leilia March 27 2012, 18:00:08 UTC
Oh!!! Like I was pulling a Dallas?! LOL you know, I don't think I've ever done the 'It was all a dream' trope. It's something to keep in mind for the future!

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olivethegreat March 26 2012, 23:53:46 UTC
=S I knew it was coming, but it was kind of weird to see haha. At least SimLiv is no longer suffering I guess because living in a little box doesn't seem like something RealMe would want to do anyway.
I am glad that Oman FINALLY decided to get his priorities right and that he and Cee are going to get married. :)

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leilia March 27 2012, 01:07:50 UTC
Yeah, I've been dreading this part mostly because I don't like killing off my friends. But honestly, it fit too well. And you're right she isn't suffering and she won't have to see what comes.

And yes, Oman finally figured things out. For the most part. He wouldn't be Oman if he weren't clueless about how people work.

*hugs* I owe you so many of these it isn't funny. Thank you again for letting me do this. Seriously, thank you.

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olivethegreat March 27 2012, 01:19:19 UTC
You are welcome haha. :)

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leilia March 27 2012, 17:58:29 UTC
Yeah, Like I said I owe you.

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