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[leilani666]

Title: Prowl's Origin
Rating: T
Pairing/Characters: Prowl
Warnings: none

Disclaimer: Not really mine and that’s probably a good thing.

Warnings: None that I can’t think of.

A/N: Tell me what you think of this one. And like always, tell me of any mistakes you see and I will fix them as soon as possible.

Prowl’s Origin

The first thing he felt as he got

Comments

[prowlsgirl]

There was a Barricade in G1 but he was part of Stuntacons.

[leilani666]

I thought the Stunticons were Motormaster, Dead End, Drag Strip, Wildrider and Breakdown. If I wiki Barricade he turns out as a Micromaster though.

[leilani666]

Fixed! Thanks! Glad you like it. I don't know if it'll stay a oneshot. When I wrote it I wasn't planning on making more chapters, but the bunny isn't completely satisfied. ^_^;

[_sixshot_]

Nice!
Thank you :)

[leilani666]

Glad you like it!

[hemlockdalise]

Whoa, what sort of car is that on your avatar? It looks like a stealthbomber got reformatted and it's awesome!

[_sixshot_]

It's "Turbo Interceptor" from the movie "The Wraith" (1986)

[evil_dm]

Oh, that's excellent! A very interesting theory that I rather enjoyed--I like how little niggling bits of Decepticon peer through in the absolute submission to a leader, and the dislike of informality with said leader.

Thank you. You made getting up for the early shift a little more bearable. ^__^

[leilani666]

Hehehe. Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. I like that part too. I can just imagine Optimus' look when Barricade kneeled in front of him. XP

[dairokkan]

I quite liked this. What a novel idea! I'd be interested in seeing a continuation, if you're up to it.

I assume reverting him to a protoform would also take care of those pesky red optics..? Kind of a giveaway otherwise.

[leilani666]

Well, reverting him would take away all the pointy bits and the Decepticon decals. The red optics would've been part of Ratchet's repairs. Though I can always say he pulled a Frenzy and just liked the color red. Kidding! I'm going with the 'part of Ratchet's repairs' idea.

I don't know if I'll continue it. I'm leaning more to a yes right now cause I'm getting some ideas. I'm really glad you liked it!

[mmouse15]

Well, I for one hope the bunny isn't done nibbling on you yet, because I like the start of this - you really get the feeling of wrongness shining through. It's a nice story. Thanks for sharing!

[leilani666]

So many stories to finish and I'm already planning chapter 2 of this... @_@ I'm glad you like it!