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Fic: Love is a cage

Mar 20, 2011 02:51

Title: Love is a cage
Author: leighlils
Rating: T
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel.
Spoilers: kind of The End (5.04) verse.
Warnings: …sad stuff?
Word Count: 470.
Summary: Dean thought what he wanted most was somebody that would never leave him.

( I'll follow you and make a heaven out of hell )

fanfiction, dean/cas

Comments 7

ginfairy March 20 2011, 07:14:22 UTC

I liked this. Very nice and I'm glad you got over your shyness :)

The only thing I saw:
'Dean wishes his heart was cage'
'Dean wishes his heart was acage' maybe?

ginfairy March 20 2011, 07:15:24 UTC

Oops, there should be a space in there obviously lol.

leighlils March 20 2011, 14:53:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I was very insecure so it means a lot to me to have positive feedback :)
And I already corrected the mistake you pointed out. I'm really surprised that aren't more haha
You were very kind, thanks a lot! 8D

writingpathways March 21 2011, 04:15:01 UTC

Very beautiful, it reads like a poem.

leighlils March 21 2011, 17:02:45 UTC

I didn't think of it as a poem, but I guess it kinda looks like one..
Thank you for the compliment :')

shichiloaf March 23 2011, 02:17:16 UTC

Ooooh I really like this!

leighlils March 23 2011, 14:20:11 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you liked it!