Was it good for you, too?

[leigh57]

Apparently, I will find posting this el jay as good as having sex.

It's a rainy Monday and I have a billion boring domestic things to do, so I would love some thought distraction while I work on that. Thus, stolen from lowriseflare:

Leave me a character/pairing for one of the fandoms I write in (or that you think I should), throw in a prompt, and I'll write

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[adrenalin211]

Adama/Roslin, voices.

[leigh57]

I hate you.

[adrenalin211]

I love you.

They are too awesome for me to write them, but here is my feeble attempt.

[leigh57]

a/n: This exists in the universe you started here, but just sucks unlike yours:)

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“I tried really hard not to want you here.”

He smiles. “I tried really hard not to want to be here.” Her thumb massages a muscle in his shoulder. There used to be a knot there. “Didn’t work,” he adds.

“For me either,” she whispers. He can feel her eyelashes blink on his chest.

She’s pressed against him everywhere, skin that’s almost luminous, red hair that’s hers, that’s real, that slides over her cheekbone and slips through his fingers.

If he were the type, he’d be embarrassed by how easily he could cry, right now.

But this place is so weird that crying isn’t the only thing he could do right now.

Even after that (and oh gods, the pleasure of her body again, under and over him, everywhere), he’s getting hard when she readjusts, her bare thigh firing on his skin

Re: They are too awesome for me to write them, but here is my feeble attempt.

[adrenalin211]

Oh. My. Flippin'. God.

You wrote me heaven fic! And it is AMAZING.

I like. I have no words. I'm like sitting here amazed, basking in the glow of this, because as corny as it sounds, it GLOWS.

I mean, it really really does.

I love the little things about heaven you put in here. How there used to be a knot in his muscle, how he's an incarnation of himself at every age (GAH, and what that means for their intimacy, goodNESS), how her laughter is uninhibited or tainted by melancholy, THE DIALOGUE. oh god. IT IS SO THEM. Fucking beautifully gorgeous.

She tried not to want him there! He tried not to want to be there! He told her how he heard her! That she said "ridiculous shit"! OMGOMG

And the END. The end. How once he realizes the there's nothing discoloring her absolute joy, he wants her to say something. ANYTHING. And she's talking about the trail with flowers.

“Also, I love you.”

He can’t speak.

“Is that what you wanted me to say?”

He touches the soft tips of her fingers and lets himself grin. “One of the things, yeah.”

Re: They are too awesome for me to write them, but here is my feeble attempt.

[leigh57]

Heaven fic! I mean, you know (because I've told you ten thousand times) how the one you wrote brings me joy like I can't even believe ever ever ever. I have read it like ten thousand times, seriously. So to try to follow that up was a ridiculous thing from the start, but that's where my mind went when you said voices.

So that happened.

But gah, I love them so much and if that's here, in the words even a little (which clearly you think it is!) then my job is done. I just want them to be happy and in love and teasing each other and cuddling and having all the things they never really got to have, or even when they did have them they always knew she was going to DIE. Fail. Oh shows, why do I even watch you? Of course, in this case I haven't even watched the worst part. Meh.

I am so rambly today. Sorry. Thank you bb. I'm thrilled it makes you happy:)

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Re: They are too awesome for me to write them, but here is my feeble attempt.

[adrenalin211]

I just... love them so much. Look at that GIF. I read this again just now and I mean. Seriously. It's breathtaking. So. That happened. And I love that it's set in this heaven AU. I would like to know more about their heaven chats. I'll wait until the next time you're feeling like posting a prompt meme to nag you for more, but this post, all of it, every last bit, made me smile like a dorky smiling thing yesterday, and then again today when I reread everything. So. Thanks for that.

Re: They are too awesome for me to write them, but here is my feeble attempt.

[leigh57]

That fucking .gif. I just lose TIME.