Ampersand

[leggymimi]

Title: Ampersand
Pairing(s): DooWoon, DooSeung, OT3 (Doojoon/Dongwoon/Hyunseung)
Rating: NC-17+
Word Count: 2801
Summary: Even if it means debasing oneself, Dongwoon will do what pleases his husband.

Comments

[leggymimi]

Yes, that is the lasting feel I wanted to give DooSeung. Wanting to choke them. But ah....... poor baby Woooooon. You are right, he needs some ass kicking, too, but then some comforting strokes to the head and kisses. The little thing needs love but feels as though he deserves no better than Doojoon...

Reading this slowly.......deargodno. Sick and twisted in-DEED. It did not seem that way as I wrote it, but as I proofread, I read this over and my stomach. Can't even. It's horrible. But ohhhhh~~ u/////u fklgdfjg you like it? Thank yoooooou.......... <3333

Snakey Hyunseung. Beautiful yet frightful. And a whore. He was honestly the only person I could see play this part the way I wanted it to be played. It was either him or Junhyung, but then I thought some more and was like no. Snake!Hyunseung it is.

;AAAAAAAA; oh bb thank yoooooou......... your words touch my heart. I will try to share more and more.... really, thank you thank you. And thank you for reading this sick shit because I don't know what's wrong with my head. ;A;

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Kekekekeke... why it's called "Ampersand"? To be quite honest, I called it that because I like the word. It doesn't tie into the story at all, or in any way. Well, it does mean the "and" thing, and I got to later thinking about "husband and wife" but truthfully, I called it "Ampersand" because I like the word and I think it sounded cool. OTL I suck at titles, so I have to do this. (I almost called it "Goodwife", but I then thought it was a stupid title so I trashed the idea. *stares at #7 key on keyboard .-. .......nope. Me neither.)

[wittesingelgirl]

Hahaha in his beauty, Hyunseung can indeed look malice and intimidatingly fearsome.

I read it slowly because I find it amazing that you are portraying Doo and Seung and Woon in such a way that I still feel like reading about Doo, Seung and Woon albeit them being the 'bad people' version of their characters as we perceive them to be. It is like I can very well see 4D HyunSeung as the snake!Seung - beautiful, malicious and cruel, DooJoon as the brash, evil, loveless DooJoon and DongWoon as the submissive, obsessive and weak DongWoon.
It is like what they could be if they were to end up bad people you know. I don't really know how best to explain it lol..and you are able to portray them in lots of vigor, making the story more compelling.

Would be interesting to read this kind of story for Junhyung, Kikwang and Yoseob - the story about the bad versions of the boys..Beast as bad people kind of thing :P

I like the title - I thought that it is because it is like the vicious circle in Dongwoon's life? I mean his submission AND Doojoon's vicious lovelessness create such a mess for him and it still continues to be AND..lol a limbo, a liminary life..

In any case, I really really like this story! Fighting with the writing, you have a real talent there!