"Maybe you should rethink eating alone. It really makes you look pathetic." Bwahahahaah!!!
*ahem* That's super good. Like, really. I loved how you wrote something about all your CIT buds.
because in five years what a person is going to remember about me is not how “cool” my friends were, but why I chose them as my friends, and what I saw in them that right there is hella quoteworthy.
goddamn. you make me proud sarah. constantly. *hug*
Sarah!!! I LOVE it!!! I love it because it really speaks to me, and to my experiences. I love it because it is wonderfully crafted and the words you chose fit it so particularly well that it flows and just feels good to read. I love it because it expresses how I feel about a place that I love, and I love it because it states my sentiments about that place. I just... I love it.
There are particular parts that I liked very much. But first, I'm going to say the one thing I didn't like. One? Freaking. I almost amaze myself by saying that... there was only one part I didn't like. I have been grading too many Junior thesis papers!!! Argh!
...I entered the Counselor in Training program at Sweyolakan (or CIT)...
Was your wording. I, if I were you, would say ...I entered the Counselor in Training (CIT) program at Sweyolakan... it's not gramatically incorrect the way you phrased it, I would just personally have put the parenthetical statement right after the words it is defining instead of afer Sweyolakan. But that's just me
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*ahem*
That's super good. Like, really. I loved how you wrote something about all your CIT buds.
because in five years what a person is going to remember about me is not how “cool” my friends were, but why I chose them as my friends, and what I saw in them
that right there is hella quoteworthy.
goddamn. you make me proud sarah. constantly. *hug*
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There are particular parts that I liked very much. But first, I'm going to say the one thing I didn't like. One? Freaking. I almost amaze myself by saying that... there was only one part I didn't like. I have been grading too many Junior thesis papers!!! Argh!
...I entered the Counselor in Training program at Sweyolakan (or CIT)...
Was your wording. I, if I were you, would say
...I entered the Counselor in Training (CIT) program at Sweyolakan...
it's not gramatically incorrect the way you phrased it, I would just personally have put the parenthetical statement right after the words it is defining instead of afer Sweyolakan. But that's just me ( ... )
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