Breakable
She sits alone, among the crowd
Somehow different, singled out
You thought you heard her scream out loud
But she hasn't said a word
She is silent, sitting quiet
Battling an inner riot
Losing, and she won't deny it
Yet still she struggles on
Her bright eyes flashing, iridescent
Beckon you into her presence
She's the form, the very essence
Of everything you love
She lets you in past her protections
And you give her your affections
She's perfect in her imperfections
That fragile girl of glass
Tread softly now, or you might break her
She'll love you, but you cannot make her
She wanders where her dreams may take her
Searching for a better life to start
Wrapped in silk but not concealing
The depths of all her inner feeling
She loves you, but her head is reeling
From fear of yet another shattered heart
...Yeah. I don't know. (My motto!) I finally finished this, its been bugging me. I started it a long time ago, but stopped after "imperfections." Its from a dream I had - a very very strange one. I don't really undersand the structure, its something new. Whatever. Anyway, so far every time I've posted something I've written I've said "Leave Comments!" and nobody has. Please tell me what you think, though. Be honest, I like criticism where its needed. Thats why I post things I write, in the first place! To get feedback and to improve! So yeah. Tell me what you think. Oh, and if you are interested I can show you some other things I've written, as well. None of its very good, its just how I let things out.
Somehow different, singled out
You thought you heard her scream out loud
But she hasn't said a word
She is silent, sitting quiet
Battling an inner riot
Losing, and she won't deny it
Yet still she struggles on
Her bright eyes flashing, iridescent
Beckon you into her presence
She's the form, the very essence
Of everything you love
She lets you in past her protections
And you give her your affections
She's perfect in her imperfections
That fragile girl of glass
Tread softly now, or you might break her
She'll love you, but you cannot make her
She wanders where her dreams may take her
Searching for a better life to start
Wrapped in silk but not concealing
The depths of all her inner feeling
She loves you, but her head is reeling
From fear of yet another shattered heart
...Yeah. I don't know. (My motto!) I finally finished this, its been bugging me. I started it a long time ago, but stopped after "imperfections." Its from a dream I had - a very very strange one. I don't really undersand the structure, its something new. Whatever. Anyway, so far every time I've posted something I've written I've said "Leave Comments!" and nobody has. Please tell me what you think, though. Be honest, I like criticism where its needed. Thats why I post things I write, in the first place! To get feedback and to improve! So yeah. Tell me what you think. Oh, and if you are interested I can show you some other things I've written, as well. None of its very good, its just how I let things out.