Critique My Legacy

[thethornlegacy]

*waves* Hey guys. This is my first post. I might get involved in some of the challenges here later. :) But at the moment I would love for you guys to critique my legacy, The Thorn Legacy, which is on this journal. :D I work really hard on it and this is my first legacy so I'd be interested in hearing anything I haven't done that's new/customary/better.

Thanks!