Fic: Breaking Void

[lefaym]

Title: Breaking Void
Author: lefaym
Betas: Many thanks to lionessvalenti, who was also there when I needed someone to bound ideas of off, and to jo02 who helped give it that extra bit of necessary polish. (Also thanks to used_songs who offered suggestions on the opening paragraph.)
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing(s): Ianto/John
Summary: Ianto comes home to find an unwanted visitor.

Comments

[pure_morning_8]

Aw Ianto <3 I could really feel his pain at the end there, but the whole thing was brilliant. Loved it.

[lefaym]

Thank you -- glad you enjoyed it. :)

[santousha]

oh my.
Poor Ianto, hugs him.

[lefaym]

Yes, lots of hugs for Ianto!

[santousha]

and here I was thinking John was redeemable.
Not so much after this.

[lefaym]

Oh, my John is Very Nasty Indeed. I do think he loves Jack though. In, you know, a really fucked up way.

[fera_festiva]

Oh! Oh, god, poor Ianto. That was terribly mean of you to make him cry like that...

Seriously - this was sad, but also oddly cathartic to read. and as always you have the characters perfect. Wonderful.

[lefaym]

I know, I felt horrible when I was writing it -- like I was kicking a puppy or something.

Thank you for your lovely comment. ♥

[51stcenturyfox]

“Do you usually flirt with explosive devices?”

“Do I detect a hint of jealousy?”

Great dialogue. And this whole paragraph is fab:
He wiped desperately at the tears on his face...

Your John is so nasty/bad. But, you know... he's a bastard, so... ;)

[lefaym]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[hab318princess]

poor Ianto, but he needed that, letting it all go even if John was really not the way to do it...

*hugs Ianto*

[lefaym]

Yes, lots of hugs for Ianto!

Thanks for commenting. :)