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[leecherous]

Title: Press
Fandom: Green Day
Rating: Adult. NC-17, I guess you'd say. Slight BDSM overtones, but fairly vanilla in fact.
Summary: So fucking pointless. I wrote this because I am annoyed at myself for not being able to write smut lately.
Notes: Yeah, I still can't write smut apparently.

Comments

i like that my keyboard only works offline. wtfconspiracy.

[payphoneboy]

wait, check it out. my keyboard is DEAD and you are WRITING. it's like a tradition or something. This isn't hinting at another A Bitch is A Bitch or anything, what are you talking about?

this was good. the pace was appropriate, kept you continuing to the next line but also didn't fly through the scene. i enjoyed the repetition in your sentences, the way it's broken up and how Mike's name wasn't mentioned until the very last line. i think maybe you're discouraged by it because it's different from the writing we usually see from you, and i think a lot of that has to do with the fact it's been awhile since you've written anything, and you've also changed a lot since the days of Hollywood stabbing potatoes with fork. but i don't think it's any less good. i like it.

you still draw us in with the first sentence, and keep readers focused on what you're trying to tell throughout the whole story playing out, or the secks in this case. i think, too, that it's harder with smut because the majority of readers have a good idea what the ending's going to be like, so you have to work harder to make sure they last until then. which you did, so! i think it was successful, and yaywriting. you're on a fiendish Billie Joe kick, aren't you? haha s'good. :)

[leecherous]

99 Problems But A Bitch Ain't One? Thinking about it, but I don't wanna say too much cuz no one should get their hopes up. Especially cuz I was smoking crack when I wrote the first one...oops.

I dunno wtf is up with my new style of writing. I miss Hollywood stabbing potatoes with a fork, for the record, I read that today at work and I was like omfg best thing ever. Just the potatoes. I digress. I'm not sure if I like the change or not, but I do like that I'm writing again. And apparently you do as well so that's a good thing.

What the shit is this working-offline thing? I don't understand that. I would offer one of my keyboards but it won't work for obvz reasons. I called Mr. SS (haha he has snape's initials!) and he didn't get tickets (just in case you check this tonight) but he said he'd go by tomorrow. And we're going either way because HOLY FUCK after the day I had I need to get as far away from that place as possible.

Yes. Billie Joe. No idea where it came from atall and I still haven't gotten ahold of her but. I don't think it's going anywhere anytime soon.

Thankyouthankyouthankyou. I think I forgot that part. And get your effin' uncle to send you another keyboard PRONTO we need drama and skiing.

[payphoneboy]

we can.. arrange.. for the crack.. sure. ninety nine bottles of beer on the wall...

I miss Hollywood stabbing potatoes. But I think this could potentially turn out just as well. Either way I think it's a good idea to continue and see where this style takes you.

I DONT KNOW BUT ITS FUCKING STUPID. I swear the SECOND I click "connect" it stops. And now it does this, work for 5min, die for 5min, work, die, work. I want it to just pick. hopefully walmart has a mac-friendly USB keyboard so i don't have to wait a week or whatever for this one.

I AM SO
FRUSTRATED.

it's good we're going to cruces. i have friday thru sunday off, your sister works at four on sunday. the robes are done, for whatever it's worth. just need grommetts, which will be done tomorrow when i buy them.