Rookie Blue: Redefine

[hibbleton]

Title: Redefine
Fandom/Pairing: Rookie Blue, Sam/Andy
Rating: PG
Word Count: 700ish
Summary: Post-ep for s02e06 "In Plain View"
Author's Note: This was intended for the Porn Battle, but as you can tell by the rating, it is missing one key element.

Comments

[lowriseflare]

in jeans and black leather, and he smells like the inside of the Penny with a hint of whatever aftershave he uses.

Thiiiiiiiiiis.

GOD I LOVE THIS WEEK, IT'S A FIC BONANZA.

[hibbleton]

I AM NOT IMMUNE TO SWAREK SMELL CLICHES.

And yes, we're all so productive! I'll try to keep the engine running from my side.

[ws_scribe]

I love this!! Everybody is looking and she hates the sympathy and he won't even look at her but he answers her call anyway and its LATE. God, I love these two!

This week IS like fic bonanza...and I think I'm getting a migraine because of it. Haha! If it means getting Sam/Andy porn/stuff in my eyeballs, eh, it's a necessary sacrifice.

Thursday! Where are you?!?!

[hibbleton]

thanks for the <3

tomorrow, tomorrow!

[poeelektra]

Okay FIRST OF ALL...this is so great. SECONDLY, all the things about this: the details thrown in quick and subtle (either you're Canadian or just that good, but I really dig the geographical tells, hints of the city), the Dov/Gail/Chris family trifecta business, how she almost calls him, the idea that this isn't her, exactly, that maybe she hasn't been putting her best foot forward these past few weeks (all season, Andy) and that she got a little lost in her earnest determination to pick the right guy/life, life between school and soccer practice (THAT, ESPECIALLY THAT, GAVE ME BIG FEELINGS), and "lungs spasming from disuse," HOOBOY.

In conclusion: MAN I hope this keeps coming, even without PB prompting people to hit the page. Lovely lovely.

[hibbleton]

ahhh you are awesome for catching all of that!

either you're Canadian or -- GUILTY AS CHARGED, though specifically I'm Torontonian, because being from Saskatchewan would be as helpful to writing Toronto as being from Oklahoma would be to writing New York City. but yes, i've offered to a couple of others, if you ever want to check up on locational aspects, feel free to drop me a line. i'd be happy to assist.

i have like, eight different stories started for these two... let's hope one or two of them makes it to the finish line.

[gwassh0ppa]

LOL. Minus the important detail.

I am quite glad it forgets that, considering how much i loathe rebounding. I have a feeling this will be quite similar to tomorrow night, if only because of Andy's hatred of attention and like you said - sympathy. The details rock and make me want to go to Toronto.

ALSO. SAM AND BLACK LEATHER. there could be pr0n based on that alone. le sigh.
A+++

[hibbleton]

yeah, i'm not sure where i was going by starting with the post-ep and going for porn, exactly, though i do believe it can be done well by writers more talented than me.

i know that they'll hook up again in canon eventually, however probably not for a few episodes. i mean, i'm impatient, but hopeful that they'll do it right.

i do love this city! it's lovely and welcoming and alive.

thank you for the feedback. pleasure doing business. :)

[threeguesses]

DUFFERIN. HITTING ALL THE REDS UP DUFFERIN. Oh god, it's so awesome to actually recognize shit in fic, I have like, an unprecedented level of excitement for this.

(She almost calls him, once.) ANDY. ANDY FREAKING MCNALLY.

[hibbleton]

never, ever thought i'd be able to set my spellcheck to English (Canada), OMG.

[threeguesses]

Heh, I typically just use Canadian spelling anyways and piss everyone off. BUT LO, NOW I AM JUSTIFIED.