Like it's your birthday every week
“What is he doing?”
Rodney and Elizabeth were standing on the bridge leading to her office, eyes fixed on John, who was standing on the balcony. He had been there for a few hours now, almost unmoving except for his hair that was flying about in the breeze. Both onlookers were undeniably worried, but it had been Rodney that asked the question.
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“He wants his death to mean as little as possible.” still catches my breath every time
well done on the psych eval. (resists selfishly wishing light the terrible curse of being a show writer)
"the sudden feeling of personal failure and inadequacy" ow, so glad he gets all he deserves in the end...
"five o’clock shadow makes me look hot" rotflol, damn, you're reading my mind!
and a very astute (as usual, brilliant lady ;)) analysis of ascention. silliest damn thing
rodney/ronon matchmakers was perfect
shoving rodney out of the room, (eg)
"I can’t become another one myself." (pets John)
“Will you come after me?” aha. that third option... well plotted.
"wiping the grin off his face" aww, poor puppy
"Almost automatically he laid his hand on her hip" :D 'mine.' 'love you.'
"I still love you even if you can’t rearrange furniture with your mind,” sounds like a good wedding vow.. ;D
eheh, entirely different in an entirely good way, which is just what I expected :) thoroughly enjoyable and thank you thank you thank you!!!! {HUG}
and... wasn't it you who said I should write something for my birthday? :) or was it ahead of yours? lol, well, this is in the process of being betaed.. happy Birthday
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I think I am the most exhausted person in the world right now, complete with the necessity to concentrate on keeping my eyes open and an annoying humming in my head and on top of everything, I still have to go to work in half an hour and be alert and able to concentrate and then I'll have to get to the airport somehow to haul my ass home. But I digress...
What I wanted to say was that I truly apologise for all the stupid mistakes and bigger and smaller errors in the text. Weeded out some of them just now, but I am sure there is still tons left.
The overall feel of it still seems to correspond to what I wanted it to be, so all is not lost. The whole subject matter is so surreal to me that i wanted the story to be a bit dreamlike as well. Or at least the defining shifts in the story.
I'm a bit nervous about what Anuna will think about the shrink scene though :P
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lol, wasn't that bad. don't recall anything that made me do double takes. I'll let you sandpaper it to your satisfaction before I print it up all prety to keep :)
its a good change to the ep, more more suitedt o John. lol, wormhole travel to another galaxy does kinda invite surealism... ;) sorry, had to say it!
I think she'll like. it actually reminded very much of a conversation we just recently had... you made a more skilled Heightmeyer than I got from the show. *her* I don't think would have gotten through to JOhn at all.
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