Glee Fanfiction

Jun 23, 2010 00:34

I just don’t think any of us really understood how far we’d take it in the end.

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The tile floor of the hallway is cold underneath my legs and I count along in my head to the ticking of my watch.

one, two, three, four…

My hand is resting on my abdomen. If I let myself think about it, I can still feel her kicking just under the skin ( Read more... )

finn/quinn, mike/kurt/matt, jesse/rachel, glee, quinn/mercedes, tina/artie

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waltzmatildah June 23 2010, 07:08:03 UTC
Holy cow.

I don't think intense is quite the right word. You've handled a potentially cheesy and stereotypical storyline with pretty freaking amazing grace here.

This is so, so bleakly awesome.

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learningtolove8 June 23 2010, 23:46:12 UTC
That means a lot to me, that you think I handled this gracefully. I really didn't want it to come off as cheesy or melodramatic.

Thank you so much for your kind words!

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waltzmatildah June 24 2010, 00:39:33 UTC
I have a bit of a reputation over in the greys anatomy fandom of being bleak and getting under people's skin when it comes to angst. When it's done well I think it can be really affecting.

This is definitely that. I don't read much Glee because it's typically a bit fluffy for my taste, but you've certainly inspired me to check it out a little more thoroughly so, thank you for that!

Now I think I might read your fic through again!

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learningtolove8 June 23 2010, 23:50:20 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for your great comment. I worked really hard to make this not a cliche and I'm so glad you liked (is that the right word here?) this.

And, I love Stars so much. They're fantastic.

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boysinperil June 23 2010, 17:14:40 UTC
Bleak. That's the word I was looking for when I read this last night. Bleak and beautiful.

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learningtolove8 June 23 2010, 23:51:19 UTC
That's exactly what I was aiming for, so thank you for your comment.

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nikkibakerrr June 23 2010, 17:31:01 UTC
This was fantastic. You are very talented.

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learningtolove8 June 23 2010, 23:51:42 UTC
Wow! Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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nephrops June 23 2010, 20:47:33 UTC
I want to scream at you and hit you and cry on your shoulder all at the same time.

Seriously, you broke my soul.
:'(

I love that you chose to have Quinn be the narrator.

I would say more, but I just want to curl up under my blankets and never come out.

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learningtolove8 June 23 2010, 23:58:39 UTC
I still love you, bb! Here watch this it'll make you happy again!

Also, writing this totally broke my soul. I'm still coming to terms with the fact that I killed Mike and Matt wtf how could i???

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nephrops June 24 2010, 00:01:17 UTC
HOW IS ONE PERSON SO DARN CUTE?
:D

annnnd yeah, it was pretty terrible to wrap my head around the fact that you KILLED EVERYONE!
D:

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learningtolove8 June 24 2010, 00:10:47 UTC
I'm surprised he doesn't spontaneously combust because of how much adorable he has stored in his body, lol.

To be fair, I didn't kill Quinn. Or Mercedes. But I thought about it.

-is shot-

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