Fic: Beneath the Surface - (8/?) Charles/Erik

Sep 07, 2011 15:01

Title: Beneath the Surface (8/?), 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
Fandom: X-Men: First Class, Charles/Erik
Genre: AU; Drama/Romance
Rating: PG-13/mild R for this chapter, possibly up to NC-17 later.
Word Count: 4127
Summary: Charles is a young marine biologist and activist that, one day, makes the find of his lifetime. Inspired by this fanart
Author's Note: ( Read more... )

x-men: first class, fanfic, cherik, slash fic

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kiriana16 September 7 2011, 15:53:47 UTC
You have no idea how much I love people who can appreciate good gif-fest.
I would like to tell you that my reaction at seeing your response was something akin to this:



But to be honest, it went more like this:



I shall leave you gify comments from now on on every new update. Yes/yes?

1. Of course he will. He's too precious and pretty to not be ;)
4. But... Charles' supposed to be different! A BETTER MAN (or at least more proper)
5. And stupid and oblivious. Can't forget these two.
6. Will it be posted sometimes in the future? I'd like to read it, Beast!Hank is always the one winning everything from me. And a little intimidated Erik is my secret kink, because that man is a freaking Nazi hunter so there's not many things that scares him. But shhhh~, I didn't told you that.
7. Like a shark? God, it takes a saying 'slap him with a fish' to a new level xD

And I'm sorry, but I probably won't be of much help in a flaws department.



Even if there are some (which I didn't see) I will ignore them with a power of a thousand suns, because I do not want to know of any flaws in something I like. It's my flaw in character.

(I like this word. FLA~W)

Have some gratuitous smiling shark instead of criticism:


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leandralocke September 7 2011, 17:25:33 UTC
Awwww you're so sweet. And if you're going Becky Rosen at my fic then... wow ^^ She's like the biggest fangirl on the planet, so that's actually really flattering ^^

7. there are too many fish jokes that have been HAUNTING me lately. Too much stuff to include in the fic, but I imagine Alex and some of the others watching Southpark one evening, and the "fish sticks = fish dicks" episode comes up. Yeah, epic cracking up and awkwardness on Charles' side who would just want to die from embarrassment at his friends ^^

Also, "something seems/smells fishy to me" will never mean the same again, and if any of them ever discover "I'm a shark, I'm a shark, suck my dick" they'll DIE laughing.

And... you really flatter me too much ^^

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kiriana16 September 7 2011, 19:07:46 UTC
LET ME BE YOUR BECKY!



There can never be too much of five things:

1. Flattery received for writing something good.
2. Slash
3. Fangirling
4. X-Men Slash (RPS included)
5. Shark jokes. <---- I want to see as many of them in this as possible, because that shit is funny and you have characters with a sense of humour in your story (not including Charles) and I can't possibly imagine Alex NOT showing the dick joke to Erik now that he knows.

And as tradition dictates have a smiling shark: (I have to come up with something else for the next update 'cause I'm running our of a good ones xD)


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kiriana16 September 7 2011, 19:18:48 UTC
*running out, goddamnit. Sorry for the double comment, but it was going to bother me and I can't find the edit comment button.

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leandralocke September 7 2011, 19:34:44 UTC
Spamming my own entry here with comments (really, this is cheating. People will think I got comments from so many people) ^^ but you give me no other choice.

I'll see if I can include that joke somehow, heh. If not that one, certainly some others, at some point.

And god, Fassy is so cute when he sharks :D
Anyway, enough now. Shoo you ^^ But thank you so, so much! ♥

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kiriana16 September 7 2011, 20:31:08 UTC
I swear it's the last one! I'll post it and I'm going to bed and I won't bother you any more until the next chapter! Pinky swear, cross my heart and hope to die. Or something. But I can't leave alone thanks without replying. Another one of my very annoying flaws of character.

YOU'RE WELCOME.



Fassy's the best when he sharks :D Have the last one:


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