Comments | leandralocke: Fic: Beneath the Surface

leandralocke

Fic: Beneath the Surface - (5/?) Charles/Erik

Aug 29, 2011 10:42

Title: Beneath the Surface (5/?), Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4
Fandom: X-Men: First Class, Charles/Erik
Genre: AU; Drama/Romance
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter, possibly up to NC-17 later.
Word Count: 6800
Summary: Charles is a young marine biologist and activist that, one day, makes the find of his lifetime. Inspired by this fanart ( Read more... )

x-men: first class, fanfic, cherik, slash fic

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leandralocke August 29 2011, 11:25:11 UTC

Seriously, those are the details I wonder about in movies. Stuff like "but... where do they pee? How do they wash?" etc ^^ Especially when people are locked up somewhere or on the run for a long time, hehe.

Hmmm... well. We shall see about that ;) But yes, there's definitely something there already.

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leandralocke August 29 2011, 11:33:01 UTC

Oh damnit, shaving... Erik should do that. Thanks for reminding me. Ah well, he's been with Charles under a week, so he could be scruffy. Maybe shark-people have slower hair-growth ^^ I shall keep that in mind though and mention that he shaves. I'm just now pondering whether someone should do it for him or just show him. He hasn't been on land for many, many years, also never fully transformed. So... his hair and beard didn't grow during that time.

endorwitch August 29 2011, 11:43:17 UTC

i need that troll pic from tumblr where its holding 2 dolls and is saying 'now kiss' :D

the fanart that inspired this is adorable. and i look forward to seeing how this unfolds! :D

leandralocke September 1 2011, 12:14:37 UTC

Sorry for the late reply. Haha yes. Let's see what you'll say at the next chapter. We need a bigger troll :D

murf1307 August 29 2011, 12:26:02 UTC

*claps hands*

Yay! A new chapter!

I love the way this is turning out, seriously. Wondering if Sean will wind up in the house, though. Also, I am theorizing that the two men who freaked out Hank were Azazel and Riptide.

Also, all of the Little Mermaid loling is driving me just a little bit mad, because it's all true.

And finally, now I want to see Charles and Erik on a boat like in the Little Mermaid.

leandralocke September 1 2011, 12:16:51 UTC

Gah I really should have replied earlier.

Sean, hm... yeah you'll see ;) I can already reveal so much that he will show up at some point.

Actually, I had intended for it to have been Azazel and Shaw himself. He wanted to go confront Hank and talk to him. I don't think he'd trust his 'minions' with important conversations, plus he enjoys intimidating people ;)

avictoriangirl August 29 2011, 15:25:49 UTC

Mmmm. I really like that little glimpse we had of protective!Erik. Moar, plz?

nathcoelho August 29 2011, 15:32:09 UTC

that was a amazing chapter!
poor them!
and really, Charles looks like that disney cartoon far too much! huahauhauhauah xD (even in the movie!!)
love it every bit! and im dying to read more soon!
=*

leandralocke September 1 2011, 12:18:49 UTC

thank you so much for your feedback. Lol yeah, I know, Charles is a Disney princess in disguise ^^ Well, okay... prince. The funny thing is, I've seen Ariel DOZENS of times as a kid, but even I had forgotten that the prince's name was Eric ^^ I nearly died laughing when I read the plot summary on wikipedia.