Fated - Alternate Ending

[leafy_girl]

So, I have spent days going through chapters of Fated and cleaning up bad grammar, punctuation and terrible spelling. Wow, what a difference 10 years makes. I think I have 2 chapters left and it's done but I don't love it. I have this unreasonable desire to rewrite it - right from the beginning. I am tempted to do it through November instead of

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[leafy_girl]

I worried that no one would see it here. I can't put a link on my profile at ffnet so I suppose it makes more sense to just post it there and put a note on the description. I'll post it in one shot so that it's not confusing as chapters come up. It's sort of the 10 year anniversary of that story so I could put it up as a little anniversary thing.

I had a story in my head that continued the little dirty one I started here but I had regrets about having their relationship start in a dark alley where he pretty much assaults her - though she loved it. I am thinking I want her to start it and for him to try not to let it happen but gives in because he's in a bad place

I wrote a new first chapter for it but I'm struggling to get her to make a move on him. He's being stubborn and miserable toward her and she's upset. But how to get her to make a move. I guess I still intend to do it. Just have so many balls in the air right now, I should pick on thing and stick with it.

Coffee Shop has been put aside as it always has been. Urg. I really should finish that too... lol.

[juju84]

Yes, I think it's great idea to post it as a stand alone on ff.net. You are right that way more people will have a chance to read it. So go for it girl!
As for the other stories I like how you plan to make go about them. And I hope you will get your muse back on Coffee Shop. I definitely want to see it completed. And the dirty one as well if you plan to make some changes and rewrite it I'm all for it. But I like you idea about the drifting apart and than starting all over again after some years and after working through the past issues. Especially with Sakura having a little kid. ^_^
I wish you good luck and a lot of inspiration, dear. I really love your writing and following your work.