smile hostage refuge [chapter three]

[leadenguide]

Title: Smile Hostage Refuge
Pairing: Max/Craig, side dish of Max/Ronnie
Rating: R - beware of the noncon.
POV: First & third
Disclaimer: Fake. Title belongs to The Used.

Prelude | One | Two

“Ronald Radke?”

“...Yeah?”

“ I’d like to ask you a couple of questions.”

Ronnie glances warily at the police badge being presented and slowly sits down,

Comments

[vvmadp]

I'm in the middle of reading, and I just wanted to tell you that right here:
“Maybe I’ll tell you the story one day,” he growls into Max’s ear, letting his lips brush the lobe. He then shuffles down his victim’s legs and immediately takes to sliding Max’s skinnies down his hips.
My heart started pounding against my ribs--FRANTICALLY--and my breath started coming a lot quicker than normal. And I started shifting positions in my computer chair and my eyes started darting a lot more. I only noticed because I hit my knee on my desk when I did it.

Also, I stopped to comment on this part because it got seriously intense and I needed to breathe for a minute and calm down and remind myself that it's just a story. But now the suspense is going to kill me so I'm going to go back and finish. But I might throw up if it doesn't end well. So stay tuned.

...

Okay, just finished.

My stomach is all queasy...

It's just so REAL. Your writing seriously puts you RIGHT THERE. It's honestly really hard to read, but in terms of subject matter only. You are amazingly, amazingly talented. A brilliant writer--no doubt about it.

[leadenguide]

Thank you so much. I know my writing can be gruesome and cruel, and it unfortunately gets worse. I don't want you upset with me, so there's your warning. I am soupie excited to put up new chapters, though.

*Sighs* I don't know how I ever got so graphic.