boobs coming out +1

[le_stupidkid]

Tittle:boobs coming out+1
Writer:Le
Pairing:inoobu
Rating:NC-17

Comments

[kodochalover]

Some inconsistencies here and there x3 like the Inoo being "wet" part near the beginning (it has to be one or the other lol), but other than that, you have a good plot going xD and I like your choice of words :3

Good job^^

[le_stupidkid]

really i use simple word only but thanks for reading :))

[kodochalover]

but sometimes simple words work best with these kinds of topics xD
but i also suggest you research some more about smut at least x3

Good luck^^

[le_stupidkid]

haha thanks i should ohh thanks for commenting :))) im le btw :D!!

[kodochalover]

Haha x)
No problem!
I write fanfic as well, so I know how much comments encourage and help a writer~ x3

Nice to meet you Le^^
I'm Gisselle :3

[le_stupidkid]

hahaha its nice to meet you giss-chan is that ok? >D and thanks again i read some of your fics before when i didnt have a acount you make great smuts haha plus your profile pic i just wanna kiss it LOL

[kodochalover]

I've never been called giss-chan x3
but i dont mind if you do xD
thank you for reading my stuff^^
and thanks for the compliment~ I appreciate it.

hehe x3
it is pretty kissable ;D
yama-chan is pretty much asking for one LOL xD