Yanda and the Smaller Piece

[mellowcandle]

Written for the prompt "Yotsubato Halloween".

Title: Yanda and the Smaller Piece
Series: Yotsuba to!
Length: 750 words
Genre: Humor
Characters: Yanda, Asagi
Summary: Yanda meets his dream girl at Koiwai's party.

Comments

[cal_reflector]

Wow, that was fast! Thanks!

It started it out a bit grim; poor Yanda, though the manga does imply he doesn't have other friends to hang out with.

Asagi's chit-chat with Yanda was very intriguing. I loved the bit that begins with her saying,"Yotsuba talks about you all the time." Had I been reading this as the first chapter of a new story, I'd continue to chapter 2.

Did you reach near the end and realize the fic was missing the Koiwai-Asagi I requested? In any case, it was lovely. Yanda's astute observation made it stand out all the more.

[mellowcandle]

I wanted to get it done before we left, so that motivated the quickness. I didn't forget the Asagi/Koiwai, just downplayed it and left it open to interpretation.

And yeah, the title has a dual meaning. It's more fun that way.

[cal_reflector]

Also, is the title referring to how Yanda only got the smaller piece of Asagi's attention, whereas Koiwai got the big piece?