*THUNK*
I I I WHAT WAIT HUH
Suppi-chan,
The following review has been submitted to: Untouchable Face Chapter: 1
From: Name Withheld To Protect The Clueless
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I did wonder what could have possibly come before that last line...and this definitly works. Brilliant writing skills you
got here especially if, as your endnote suggests, your not english or whatever. It also gives me faith in the the
translated manga edition as to how close to the Jap it is...cause the translation is exactly the same to yours :p
The note in question:
10/14/01
W00t, Meg's ficcing again! =D Sorry, I'm a bit giddy on account of the bleeping medicines I've been taking have totally taken away any desire to write that I might have. And about a month ago I had a very nasty seizure [as near as we can figure, interaction between hormones and medication, but it was Unfun], which took me a while to get over, and THEN I went to Seattle. But when I went to Seattle, my everloving imouto and part-time minion Erin got me volumes two and three of DN Angel. <3 And I'd had Satoshi crouching moodily in the corner listening to "Untouchable Face" on repeat for a while, but had no idea how to fic it. So when I saw the scene where he's sitting beside Daisuke in the nurse's office, it eventually occured to me to wonder, what WAS Hiwatari-kun talking to Niwa about before Riku comes in and hears "...Mou jikan ga nai -- ore ni mo, omae ni mo..." -- which I translated as the last line of the fic. [And yes, I was all over Satoshi like a baaad coat when I saw him in drag. =3]
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10:56 PM 7/21/2003
.... why did I never upload this to FF.net? Oo; I did now, anyway.
_O_
I mean.
Eve: prolly someone from the West Coast
Eve: *has Coast bias*
Eve: XD
Meg: I AM A NATIVE OREGONIAN
I'm just a little boggled because you don't get much more native English speaker than I am. WHITEY SO WHITE SHE MAKE WONDERBREAD LOOK BROWN. Fangirl Japanese to the contrary SHUT UP IT WAS FOUR YEARS AGO.
Added to this was another hay r u goin 2 rite moar??? lolz review to a fic I said was a one shot three years ago, also come to think of it I found a whole bunch of very very old FMA fic in an old binder.
Suppi-chan,
The following review has been submitted to: Untouchable Face Chapter: 1
From: Name Withheld To Protect The Clueless
-------------------
I did wonder what could have possibly come before that last line...and this definitly works. Brilliant writing skills you
got here especially if, as your endnote suggests, your not english or whatever. It also gives me faith in the the
translated manga edition as to how close to the Jap it is...cause the translation is exactly the same to yours :p
The note in question:
10/14/01
W00t, Meg's ficcing again! =D Sorry, I'm a bit giddy on account of the bleeping medicines I've been taking have totally taken away any desire to write that I might have. And about a month ago I had a very nasty seizure [as near as we can figure, interaction between hormones and medication, but it was Unfun], which took me a while to get over, and THEN I went to Seattle. But when I went to Seattle, my everloving imouto and part-time minion Erin got me volumes two and three of DN Angel. <3 And I'd had Satoshi crouching moodily in the corner listening to "Untouchable Face" on repeat for a while, but had no idea how to fic it. So when I saw the scene where he's sitting beside Daisuke in the nurse's office, it eventually occured to me to wonder, what WAS Hiwatari-kun talking to Niwa about before Riku comes in and hears "...Mou jikan ga nai -- ore ni mo, omae ni mo..." -- which I translated as the last line of the fic. [And yes, I was all over Satoshi like a baaad coat when I saw him in drag. =3]
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10:56 PM 7/21/2003
.... why did I never upload this to FF.net? Oo; I did now, anyway.
_O_
I mean.
Eve: prolly someone from the West Coast
Eve: *has Coast bias*
Eve: XD
Meg: I AM A NATIVE OREGONIAN
I'm just a little boggled because you don't get much more native English speaker than I am. WHITEY SO WHITE SHE MAKE WONDERBREAD LOOK BROWN. Fangirl Japanese to the contrary SHUT UP IT WAS FOUR YEARS AGO.
Added to this was another hay r u goin 2 rite moar??? lolz review to a fic I said was a one shot three years ago, also come to think of it I found a whole bunch of very very old FMA fic in an old binder.