"Get me rewrite!"

[lauzeta]

Hmm. I probably shouldn't talk about the "main thrust" of an argument in a discussion of a character who also happens to be a prostitute, should I?

*headdesk*

This academia thing is full of pitfalls. :D

Comments

[jeppa]

Oh man, I LOLed. Possible other phrase to stay away from:

"the selling point"

[lauzeta]

HEE.

[lalaithlockhart]

HEE.

[fuzzycoatimundi]

You could help the reader "take it all in"?

[lauzeta]

....

[ennazu]

LOL. I think you should actually include as many of those as possible.

[lauzeta]

As it turns out, I'm leaving it in. *doesn't make the obvious joke* The professor has a sense of humour. :D