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Meltdown ( Sentinel Thursday Challenge 195)

Jun 05, 2007 06:42

Title: The Return of the Sentinel
Author: Laurie
Category: Slash
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual Scenes
Length: 2000 words (more or less)

Beta’d by t_verano. Thank you for the assistance.

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. This story is transformative in nature.

Permission granted to archive, except for Fanlib.

I’m hot.
I’m cranky from ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

laurie_ky June 5 2007, 11:59:44 UTC

Well, at least it posted to my journal, after the second try. But why is the story bolded? I didn't post it that way. ::wanders away scratching head::

Laurie

t_verano June 5 2007, 14:29:50 UTC

I don't know why the bold, but I'm so glad to see that at least you're continuing to be able to post (even if you do have to kick LJ a couple of times first).

Like I said :-) -- the new stuff makes me happy, and the "old" stuff does, too. Good things happen when you get cranky and contemplate ice cream.

bumpkin_is November 18 2007, 21:43:52 UTC

Heh, the story was bolded because it was pretty darn hot maybe? *g* At any rate it was more than readable and I liked what I read. It was lots of fun, thanks for sharing.

keep penning,
Marns
~pN

laurie_ky November 19 2007, 01:15:18 UTC

I'm getting better at posting but sometimes things just throw me for a loop. Hence the bolding which lj did,not me.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I was hot(physically) when I wrote this and ice cream sounded really good.
Laurie

quyllur January 19 2009, 03:20:14 UTC

Very good way to get revenge for melted ice cream! Still, I could envision the way the loft would look with all the horrors you described! Oh, the agony that Jim had to experience in that moment.

What a good way to end everything! Love Jim spooning around his Blair.

But where are the kittens?

laurie_ky January 20 2009, 10:09:36 UTC

The kittens were given good homes by the other students in the focus group. They came upon them in the alley near the loft, and the laundry baskets were used to corral them.

And yes, Jim had a horrific moment there, when he gazed upon the wreckage.

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and commenting,

And I'm glad you're able to pop back in on lj.

Laurie

missingkeys March 29 2013, 22:57:03 UTC

Just clicking story links in the middle of the night, but this is AWESOME! I love how you write these guys. I wonder if Blair was hoping for a punishment, but I guess we'll never know. :) Yum!

laurie_ky May 4 2013, 23:38:50 UTC

I'm glad that you liked this story (gosh, this was one of the first ones I ever wrote)and enjoyed Blair's talent for making messes and Jim's response.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I apologize for taking so long to respond, I lost track of which email the comment belonged to, until I remembered I could check on my home page under the comments section.

Laurie