amanda showed me, and then we made fun of it.
makanikaikaina: its a crappy essay too
laurenf714: i know
laurenf714: the structure is so weak
makanikaikaina: yup
laurenf714: no supporting quotes
makanikaikaina: as is organization
makanikaikaina: and proof
makanikaikaina: lol
laurenf714: definately could have had some gatsby quotes in there
laurenf714: I have been down this path for all of my post-pubescent life and it has gotten me NOWHERE… at least not in the women department.
laurenf714: so its gotten you somewhere in the men department?
Maybe it's because you're ugly:
http://www.angelfire.com/vt2/g_hols/Niceguy