Of Demons, Shifters and Maniacal Mages (Chapter 4)

[laure1724]

Title: Of Demons, Shifters and Maniacal Mages (Chapter 4)
Character/Pairing: Jun/Chun, Jun/Ho (Junho/Yunho), some JaeChun, 2U bffery, awkward MinChun brothers
Genre: drama/angst, romance, and a bit of comedy, paranormal au
Rating: PG-13
Word Count:2,051
Disclaimer: I have a what?

Summary: Changmin is Yoochun's older half-demon, half-mage over-

Comments

[ztarplay]

MINE!

[ztarplay]

Okay,I'm a little confused by the back and forth with Jaejoong, Changmin and Yoochun... I'm sensing some of that wasn't meant to be in Jaejoong's mind or something? *Shrug*

Other than that, this was great. We get to see more of Changmin's motivations and true devotion. I'm not sure if I like Jaejoong yet though. Mhm. Looking forward to your next chapter. (^__^)

[laure1724]

oopps...

I totally forgot to add my divisions back in after I formatted it kekekeke

[laure1724]

I know it can be confusing to read

In a nut shell: Changmin and Jaejoong's discussion happened almost right after Changmin pops into the shop in Chapter 3 and what is happening with the group and Jaejoong and Yoochun is later that day.

I wanted to show how Jaejoong showing up was all part of Changmin's evil plan to keep Junsu away from Yoochun in steps as it was happening in 'real-time'.

[ztarplay]

Oh with the divisions it's pretty much crystal clear. *Giggles* Silly me. I need idiot proof tabs. XP

[laure1724]

I'm glad the divisions help, I wanted it to be clear but my brain doesn't work that way so it takes some work (and took long to write) >:D

[ztarplay]

No worries dear, you did good. :)