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bexy31 January 4 2011, 07:42:42 UTC
Ahh, this was awesome!!! ^w^
I feel so sorry for Yoochun, being beaten and stuff :( (Bad Yunho >.>)
I like how Jaejoong and Changmin are both smitten with Yoochun and are upholders of the law and such ^_^
Yoochun really is pretty~
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

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laure1724 January 4 2011, 08:01:40 UTC
Thanks sweetie, I'm so glad you liked it - I was really nervous about this o.O
Yunho is rather naughty in this fic, but someone had to be the bad guy >:D
Yoochun totally has a thing for cops XD
I should be posting the next chapter later this week, so look out for it ^^

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shana_fujiwara January 4 2011, 13:33:38 UTC
your English is pretty high class for to understand but still I want to read the next one. Can you do it? Pretty please?? X3

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laure1724 January 4 2011, 17:25:42 UTC
I'm happy to know you want to read more ^^
I will try to post the next chapter by the end of the week

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english_01 January 4 2011, 15:15:17 UTC
NEW FIC!! Woohoo~~~! xDD

-shamelessly saved a spot-

Will be back when I'm done studying. *wink*

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laure1724 January 4 2011, 17:26:48 UTC
Hurry back BB!
I want to know what you think of this one ;D

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english_01 January 5 2011, 01:54:25 UTC
*squeals* I FREAKING LOVE THIS! God babe, this is quite intense. I was biting my nails because I want Jae with Chun.. but at the same time, I want Min with Chun. >.< Hopefully, this will be an awesome love triangle! ^^

I enjoy this very much babe. With TWO sheriffs and a slutty-almost-innocent!Chun.. *drools*

Can't wait for the next update hun ^^ (This is like a chocolate topping of my favorite ice-cream. Delicious! xDD)

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laure1724 January 5 2011, 02:25:29 UTC
O/////O
I'm so glad you like it ^^
I hope the next part will be to as good...
And this love triangle many get very complicated ;D
I'll try to update by the end of the week ^^

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killboredom January 5 2011, 09:48:57 UTC
I like where this is goin~ I'm a sucker for innocent Chun (actually anything with him in it)
Not fond of Western thinggies but this one's pretty interesting :)

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laure1724 January 5 2011, 18:00:34 UTC
Thanks so much sweetie!
I have a huge Chun bias as well XD
I usually don't like westerns either but this just sort of happened...hopefully I can keep it interesting ^^

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okkitten January 5 2011, 20:06:23 UTC
fdsajhfjksa *flail* so excited about this story!

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laure1724 January 5 2011, 20:15:34 UTC
BB! Yay!!!!
This fic has been a long time in the making and it has consumed my Christmas break XD
I hope you'll like the rest of it ^^ *Will post chapter 1 at the end of the week*

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okkitten January 5 2011, 20:21:02 UTC
I know I fell off a cliff for a while. I'm trying super hard to get organized in the new year and be better about commenting. I've missed youuuuuuuuuuuu!

I'm super excited about it so far and Micky's stuff made me tear up a lil. My poor bb I hope he gets some lovin soon from one deputy or another......or both! ;) Anxiously awaiting the next update!

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laure1724 January 5 2011, 20:29:00 UTC
I missed you too &hearts
I am a sucker for an angsty Chun >:D
He will definitely be getting some lovin' ;D ... but it might take a little while...

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