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okkitten March 16 2010, 10:46:03 UTC
Oh man this was so worth staying up for! Well I know I slept a few hours but still. I couldn't really *sleep* until I got to read this chapter! I love the dynamic of the younger trio and the way they slip so easily from playing a game to playing with each other. The way each of them manages to show the others equal amounts of love/attention is so well written and beautiful. <3333

I looooooove jealous/desperate Junsu. Sure he's angelic but after a loving confession comes the love-making. Silly Khun! I love how each pairing does things differently. There's almost no dialogue with Junsu and Khun when they're doing the deed and it seems to suit their relationship. Whereas Taec/Jay are a little more chatty and the trio are more frenzied than the others. I'm happy Junsu finally got what he wanted. Hopefully their communication will be better from now on too ;)

And now my babies. Taec/Jay. *happy sigh* this scene just killed me. As I'm sure you noticed by my gushing over MSN. I especially loved the way you used trust and love in their words/thoughts. It worked really well and was just beautiful. I'm glad Taec was able to finally get Jay over the worst of his issues even if it was by force. I am now *dying* slowly in anticipation of the next chapter because I cannot wait to see Jay finally *really* go all the way with Taec and trust him 100%. *melts into a puddle of fangirly goo*

Thank you a million times over for writing this. Seriously. I know it sounds stupid but amazing fic work like this totally gives me energy when I feel drained/upset. <33333

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laure1724 March 16 2010, 11:10:26 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I &hearts your giant comment XD *kisses for the ego stroking*
You waited for this most of the night with me you sweet crazy lady
Thank you so much for being my on the spot beta and number one fan :D
I really wanted each smut scene to showcase the different types of relationships they all have and I'm so glad you noticed that *success*
When I finally wrap this thing up in one or two more parts Jay and Taec's relationship will be set ^^
I can't promise fast updates, but I can promise that they will be lengthy as always ^^

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