Comments | laurab1: Torchwood/Doctor Who - fic & art - The Torchwood Girls, part 1, Jack, TARDIS, Joan, PG

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Torchwood/Doctor Who - fic & art - The Torchwood Girls, part 1, Jack, TARDIS, Joan, PG

Sep 24, 2007 02:27

Following that little Jack/TARDIS telepathy bit, here, at last, is the start of the WWI fic.

I have used some ideas here that szm also used; we had similar ideas at the same time.

Title - The Torchwood Girls
Author - laurab1Characters - Jack, TARDIS, Joan Redfern, OCs ( Read more... )

torchwood girls fic part to be reposted

Comments 38

msp_hacker September 24 2007, 01:55:40 UTC

Oh, historical!Torchwood! Yay!

laurab1 September 24 2007, 11:15:55 UTC

Thank you!

travels_in_time September 24 2007, 02:57:34 UTC

I love this, the idea of Jack planning ahead, recruiting women, hooking up (in the "working with" sense) with Joan. But at the moment my heart is breaking because Jack didn't find himself in the book! (I cling to the thought that he was in the torn-out pages. That John Smith didn't want to have to explain the picture of the incredibly handsome man winking at him.)

"He seemed so terribly...not entirely there, both as John Smith and the Doctor.”

Perfect description...and Jack recognizes it immediately.

laurab1 September 24 2007, 11:19:09 UTC

Thank you :)

It's good to see the story on the page, finally, it's been in my head for so long. I think the hivemind had *that* idea about the missing pages and Jack.

secbeth September 24 2007, 11:01:50 UTC

I like this fic... it's real and works for me...

laurab1 September 24 2007, 11:19:29 UTC

Thank you :)

tatlovestea September 24 2007, 11:38:44 UTC

This is a wonderful idea! I was a bit upset when I reached the end- that was until I saw the TBC at the bottom! Yay!

Your Joan is very well done, btw. :D

laurab1 September 24 2007, 11:50:42 UTC

Thank you! There will be plenty more; the bunny is here - http://laurab1.livejournal.com/179586.html

I have another story with Joan here - http://laurab1.livejournal.com/182599.html, some of which I've re-used in this story.

unfeathered September 24 2007, 11:51:10 UTC

Mmmm, I love the idea of this.

Poor Jack, just missing the Doctor! And not being in the journal!

I did have a feeling that perhaps Joan trusted Jack a little too quickly - she seemed such a shrewd, no-nonsense woman that I'd have thought she'd take a bit longer to open up to him - but I'm willing to believe she was just blown away by his smile... :-)

Look forward to the next part!

laurab1 September 24 2007, 12:14:19 UTC

Thank you :)

I did have a feeling that perhaps Joan trusted Jack a little too quickly - she seemed such a shrewd, no-nonsense woman that I'd have thought she'd take a bit longer to open up to him - but I'm willing to believe she was just blown away by his smile... :-)

I'll have another look at that bit.