Torchwood-fic-Suddenly I See&Why the hell it means so much to me, TW3 team, PG

[laurab1]

Now unembargoed, and re-posted from tw_flashfic.

The initial drabble-and-a-half:

Title - Suddenly I See
Rating - PG
Characters -TW3 team
Length - 150 words
Summary - a corner of the eye thing
Challenge - alternative lives, on tw_flashfic
Spoilers - as far as 1.4 Cyberwoman
Disclaimer - The BBC’s and RTD’s, not mine
Feedback is loved and appreciated :) Enjoy!

Comments

[waterfall8484]

Wow, those are really good! I liked both the short and the long version, and the long one was sort of five collected drabbles in itself. :~)

You've made it so that the stories can be completely independent if you read them by themselves, and at the same time reading the short one again after having read the long one gives it much more depth. I especially liked the sentence none of them can quite remember what they think they have forgotten.

[laurab1]

Thank you for the lovely comments :)

none of them can quite remember what they think they have forgotten - yes, I do like that line.

[unfeathered]

These are really good. I think I actually like the short one best, but it's nice to have the longer one fleshing out the stories a bit more.

[laurab1]

Thank you!

[sunstar77]

I liked both of these. The first one was quite heartbreaking.

[laurab1]

Thank you :)

[nitesh_update]

These were all fantastic. Nice work!

[laurab1]

Thank you :) I like your icon.

[rachel68620]

Oh I liked these a lot. The short one is good enough to stand on it's own. But the long one, especially the Tosh and Ianto ones are great.

[laurab1]

Thanks, Rachel! I'm happy you like them :)