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laughtersmelody

Battle Of Wills

Jan 02, 2010 01:15

Title: Battle Of Wills ( Read more... )

type: one-shot, rating: pg-13, genre: hurt/comfort, fanfiction: stargate atlantis, character: john sheppard, character: jennifer keller

Comments 12

theeverdream January 2 2010, 09:33:33 UTC

Aw, this is a wonderful character study. I love Shep whump and absolutely adored Search and Rescue.. it's nice to read things from that kind of perspective.

laughtersmelody January 2 2010, 09:58:40 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! :) Keller's perspective was fun to write.

I loved Search and Rescue too, and I completely agree about Shep whump as well, lol. :)

linzi5 January 2 2010, 11:21:41 UTC

This gave me a really nice, warm feeling ( ... )

laughtersmelody January 3 2010, 02:23:15 UTC

Thank you so much! :) I can't tell you how much your comments mean.

I have to admit that I wasn't always that fond of Keller on screen either, but I had fun writing her point of view. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! :)

I'm also very glad that you liked my take on Sheppard. I loved that moment in Search and Rescue when he asked Keller to just patch him up so that he could go after Teyla. I couldn't help thinking that he would have to be 100% sure that he could do his job then, because if he wasn't, he'd be putting Teyla and the rest of his team in danger. I wonder if that's why he seemed to get so angry with Carter when she questioned his judgement. She unintentionally accused him of putting his pride before his team.

Lol, Shep whump is always makes me happy too, lol. :D

alipeeps January 2 2010, 11:34:51 UTC

Aww that was a lovely little slice of Shep whump - good characterisation of both Sheppard and Keller and I looooove stoic Sheppy ignoring his injuries in favour of making sure his team is ok. :)

laughtersmelody January 3 2010, 02:39:06 UTC

Thank you!!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially because you write such excellent whump yourself! :)

hugglewolf January 2 2010, 15:08:33 UTC

Nice Keller POV on Sheppard; I don't envy her when he feels better and starts trying to charm his way out of the infirmry!

laughtersmelody January 3 2010, 02:40:28 UTC

Thank you so much! Lol, I don't envy her either.

padawan_aneiki January 2 2010, 16:36:05 UTC

Heee! Yes indeed. Now I'm no Keller fan; I thought her character could have had some potential but I hated how they wrote for her. Ick. But it's the truth that John puts everybody else ahead of himself, and so an outside POV on it is pretty cool. I liked the "Asks the man with a stab wound" bit...that sums up that outside POV perfectly.

:)

laughtersmelody January 3 2010, 02:48:51 UTC

Lol, I'm not really a Keller fan either. :) To be honest, when the bunny caught my eye, I went, "Keller...okay. I can do that. Um...wait. I've never really paid much attention to her." Maybe part of that is because I always missed Carson when he wasn't there.

But I love outside POVs, and I couldn't resist trying to capture her view of Sheppard. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! :)