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Fade to Black, a Supernatural Fic

Jan 19, 2014 22:26

Title: Fade to Black
Author: LaueHime
Characters: Sam, Dean
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Family
Pairing: None (Gen)
Word Count: +/- 5,200
Warnings: Violence (non graphic)
Summary: Sam and Dean are caught digging a grave and have to explain themselves to the police. Unfortunately Dean loses it and Sam is stuck between them, taking the hits when punches ( Read more... )

fanfiction, limp!sam, fighting, supernatural, head injury, hospital, hurt!sam, prompt, bigbro!dean

Comments 6

harrigan January 20 2014, 14:12:30 UTC

Isn't writing for prompts fun? I think you matched this one very well!

lauehime January 20 2014, 15:02:55 UTC

It is ! It was my first experience with prompts and I loved it ! I'll def try that again!
Thanks a bunch for the feedback ! I really appreciate it :)

cocoplumb February 12 2014, 18:30:42 UTC

Abselutely loved this! Dean all protective, oh my heart!! Perfect amount of schmoop and angst! Thank you so much for filling something I could not, I hope you consider writing many more prompts in the future!

lauehime February 12 2014, 18:41:00 UTC

Thank you so much ! I'm really glad you liked how I worked your amazing prompt! I really wanted to get this right for a first one and be assured that I will renew that amazing experience :)
And of course I had protective Dean all over! ;) It's my favorite thing to write in the world haha! I'm really happy you liked it, seriously. Thank you and thanks for the wonderful prompt xx

anonymous February 22 2014, 05:49:26 UTC

I love how sweet Dean is in this story. I was just watching "The Girl Next Door" last week and for some reason it really bothered me that Dean punched Sam in the face for taking the Impala after Sam had just been hospitalized with a severe head trauma that made him have seizures. Poor Sammy seems like he's always getting hit in the head with something! Great story, love big bro Dean to pieces.

lauehime February 23 2014, 16:10:28 UTC

I hope you're going to see this and thank you !! You're right, Sam's always getting his head in the way of some beating and especially that scene with Dean punching him was very frustrating to me too! I started a fic with that storyline actually, it's on FF.net though. I'm glad you liked my story and thanks for taking the time to leave feedback ! Big bro Dean is the best thing in this world :)