watch all this happening and feel powerless to stop it

[latine]

For falling_fast_x3 (clandestine meeting, lust or love moment, scent present throughout all story - sort of cheated on that one;deadline today).

Comments

[falling_fast_x3]

Sharon! This is absolutely amazing! I've read through it three or four times now and with each read it seems to get even more intense. The imagery - oh - I don't even know where to begin. It's so absolutely vivid and I feel as if it's me pressed up against a portable toilet searching for satisfaction.

The desperation builds up wonderfully just as it would in reality. Also, the way you wrote this - using "you" instead of "she" - makes it even more raw and poignant.

I also love the whole reference to the cigarettes. It was an excellent way to start the story and then tie it all back together with that last line.

I'm really glad you wrote this for my prompt. It's beautiful. Thank you. ♥

[latine]

At first I hesitated if I should should write it in first or second person, but I opted for the latter.

I'm honoured that you liked it!

[falling_fast_x3]

Because of this drabble, I ended up writing in twilight__love. You need to write more often. It absolutely inspires me because your pieces have a tendency to stay in my mind for days so I can't help but to write. So thank you. :)

[latine]

Are you serious? Oh my goodness, this makes me feel so good! I should write more often so that you would be inspired more often so I would feel this good more often. I should. You also told me that you were inspired by my Mike!fic too! Oh god.

I haven't read the last piece you updated - I did open it in a new tab this afternoon, but as I read it I wasn't concentrated and decided I was going to reread it when my mind would be emptier of thought and I could actually be focused on it. I will read it soon, I promise.

[latine]

Thank you thank you thank you! Thank you even for reading!