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The Lens Through Which We Look

Apr 16, 2010 08:26

Title: The Lens Through Which We Look
Author: latetothpartyhp
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama
Spoilers: for Checkmate
Pairing: Chlollie and flashbacks of Chlark
Warnings: The usual: some angst, vulgarity and references to sexual situations.
Summary / Author's Note: Set immediately after Checkmate. Chlollie through Clark's eyes.

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chlark, chloe sullivan, fic: the lens through which we look, chlollie, clark kent, oliver queen

Comments 14

bklyangel April 16 2010, 14:37:28 UTC

This has just enough Creepy!Clark and its exactly what I imagined after the last episode.

latetothpartyhp April 19 2010, 02:37:31 UTC

Thank you! Kinda bummed we need to imagine so much of what happens in that relationship.

kitmerlot1213 April 16 2010, 15:18:00 UTC

I love seeing the new S9 SuperDouche Clark's remembrances of S1 to S8 Clark's memories of his relatiosnhip with Chloe. And I like that he has completely miscalculated how much Chloe and Oliver mean to each other.

And this line: "and in one of those shirts his mother always clicked her tongue at after the girl had gone" cracked me up. I can easily see Martha disapproving of the amount of cleavage Chloe showed in highschool. I wonder what she'd think of Lois' inappropriately tight "office" clothes?

Great story :):)

latetothpartyhp April 19 2010, 02:34:59 UTC

Heh. Yeah, I think Martha may have encouraged Clark's Fear of Boobies (although once when we were watching S2 my husband commented, "Are they filming Martha in 3D now? They look as if they're coming out of the screen!" So I don't know if she has much room to complain...).

I think Clark has no, or very little*, idea of what a change Chlollie signifies for his relationship to Chloe. Ollie is NOT Jimmy.

rjchasez April 16 2010, 15:38:02 UTC

Ooh. So angsty. Kind of hurt to read. But amazing work.

latetothpartyhp April 19 2010, 02:11:35 UTC

Thank you for reading. I think Chlark in general has really hurt this year.

lynzie914 April 16 2010, 16:12:11 UTC

This is amazing! I loved seeing Clark's perspective on the Chlollie relatinship and him remembering past times with Chloe. Its a very interesting take that I don't remember reading anything like it before. Great job!

latetothpartyhp April 19 2010, 02:09:50 UTC

Thank you! I've been trying all season to figure out what's going on in that pretty little head of Clark's. Because it's just ... not Clark. So I wrote on the assumption that whatever he's thinking, they're not necessarily his thoughts. Needless to say, I've got my fingers crossed for an Eradicator reveal of some kind (in which case maybe I'll need to a sequel: what Real!Clark thinks of everything?)

sxymami0909 April 16 2010, 16:13:44 UTC

I really liked this, seeing things from Clark's POV or at least what's posing as Clark right not LOL Nice job! The Chlollie interactions were made of awesome! :-D

latetothpartyhp April 19 2010, 02:03:09 UTC

Hey - thanks for reading! I'm so hoping that whatever the thing is using Clark Kent's body right now gets exorcised or revealed or something soon!