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Drabble ~ Season 6 ~ Spike

Jun 06, 2006 13:38

Title: Colder than Death. (My thanks to TalesofSpike for the title suggestion ( Read more... )

Comments 7

lillianmorgan June 6 2006, 04:28:02 UTC

Love the mixture of sensations - the heat and warmth in that! And very nice how you jumped forward and backward in time.
Very nice drabble!

alwaysjbj June 6 2006, 04:45:06 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was written for the open_on_sunday comm and the prompt was hot/cold.

Hmmm... there wasn't any jumping back in time... just him thinking that he hadn't felt cold since he was turned.

lillianmorgan June 6 2006, 05:53:35 UTC

Hmmm... there wasn't any jumping back in time...
Well, allusions then. I meant this bit anyway:
He never felt the cold, not since that long ago night in a dank London alleyway.

alwaysjbj June 6 2006, 05:57:38 UTC

Thanks, sweetie. You just had me worried that it was ambiguous and that it read like there actually WERE time jumps.

zanthinegirl June 6 2006, 05:26:08 UTC

oh, like this very much! Great use of sensory details.

alwaysjbj June 6 2006, 05:58:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

untitleddemo June 15 2006, 07:51:45 UTC

Love this! This part in particular, and the absence of her warmth chilled him to the bone just as her heat had scalded him to the very depths of his being brings such a vivid feeling to mind. Thank you for always contributing so much to this community. *hugs*