*slow brain melt*
Go Not Gently If you haven't read it, do. Warnings for language, spoilers, noncon, sex, and general brain-breaky. Thank you, celeloriel. Jesus H. Christ. My brain...just...shattered. Enough that I'm even willing to ignore the spelling errors and typos.
persona didn't help any *grins evilly*
Anyway. I need food. Also to reconstruct my brain before it leaks out my ears and leaves me with even fewer brain cells.
Why do I have to go to work tomorrow?
Also, I'm a total dumbass, and forgot that I had physical therapy this morning which I realized when I sat down at my desk at 7:50 and went "fuck damn it." *sigh* It's because I'm nonfunctional in the morning. I follow my routine because my brain's not awake enough for independent thought. Get up. Hit snooze button. Stagger back to bed. Repeat. Get up, get dressed, grab lunch, grab purse, go to car. Drop sabrielrose off at the L station. Continue down the street, turn right, go four blocks, turn right, drive until I get to 41, turn right, take the Edens, get off at the appropriate ramp, drive for a while, turn right, drive, turn left, turn left, turn right, park, walk into the building, go to my desk. This routine basically doesn't vary because I'm not capable enough in the morning to vary it.
Which makes the fact that I had physical therapy at 7:30 am difficult to process, despite the reminder call yesterday. (OK, so the Swiss cheese memory totally didn't help. But still.)
Short rant:
Dear Fantwit,
You get points for having used spell-check and grammar-check. But your fic really would have been better if you had put the plot in a plotfic and the rest in a PWP. Your summary looked interesting enough, but the execution was poor. I skimmed %90 of the plot, looked at the PWP, choked on my soda, and grabbed for the brain bleach. When you said CloudxSephiroth with Cloud as seme, I was curious.
Let's get one thing straight. Sephiroth is a warrior machine. While in certain circumstances I will buy Sephiroth as uke, I will not buy the notion of Sephiroth as a whimpering, slavish sub begging at Cloud's feet for a hint of attention. YOU FUCKING FAIL.
No love at all, and the loss of all your spelling-and-grammar points,
Meglet
Right. With that out of the way...
unclehyena, shall we try this Exalted one-shot thing again? If you're still interested. :)
persona didn't help any *grins evilly*
Anyway. I need food. Also to reconstruct my brain before it leaks out my ears and leaves me with even fewer brain cells.
Why do I have to go to work tomorrow?
Also, I'm a total dumbass, and forgot that I had physical therapy this morning which I realized when I sat down at my desk at 7:50 and went "fuck damn it." *sigh* It's because I'm nonfunctional in the morning. I follow my routine because my brain's not awake enough for independent thought. Get up. Hit snooze button. Stagger back to bed. Repeat. Get up, get dressed, grab lunch, grab purse, go to car. Drop sabrielrose off at the L station. Continue down the street, turn right, go four blocks, turn right, drive until I get to 41, turn right, take the Edens, get off at the appropriate ramp, drive for a while, turn right, drive, turn left, turn left, turn right, park, walk into the building, go to my desk. This routine basically doesn't vary because I'm not capable enough in the morning to vary it.
Which makes the fact that I had physical therapy at 7:30 am difficult to process, despite the reminder call yesterday. (OK, so the Swiss cheese memory totally didn't help. But still.)
Short rant:
Dear Fantwit,
You get points for having used spell-check and grammar-check. But your fic really would have been better if you had put the plot in a plotfic and the rest in a PWP. Your summary looked interesting enough, but the execution was poor. I skimmed %90 of the plot, looked at the PWP, choked on my soda, and grabbed for the brain bleach. When you said CloudxSephiroth with Cloud as seme, I was curious.
Let's get one thing straight. Sephiroth is a warrior machine. While in certain circumstances I will buy Sephiroth as uke, I will not buy the notion of Sephiroth as a whimpering, slavish sub begging at Cloud's feet for a hint of attention. YOU FUCKING FAIL.
No love at all, and the loss of all your spelling-and-grammar points,
Meglet
Right. With that out of the way...
unclehyena, shall we try this Exalted one-shot thing again? If you're still interested. :)