Fic: The Hunters Chapter 7 Ginny/Hermione Adult

[lash_larue]

Author: Lash_Larue
Title: Determinations
Pairing: Ginny/Hermione
Rating: Adult
Summary: serious things are reluctantly decided
Warnings: discussion of infidelity, reference to group relationship
Word Count: 2865
Disclaimer: These characters belong to JK Rowling

Comments

[redbeargrl]

Damn it! You made the Bear cry!
I couldn't have hoped for a better reaction from Hermione's parents, but the rings just brought tears to my eyes.
And Percy being all in charge and taking care of his Father and doping his Mum. Perfect!
And Orchids! OMG orchids! Methinks the Veela are going to get their Queen after all.
Is happy Bear now.

[zofbadfaith]

Percy's being quite the nice guy, isn't he? And even though it's kind of normal (for me, just for me hahah) to hear about heads being cut open, Molly's reaction was expected, too, mmhm. This is good :D I hope it goes well, 'cause, you know, Arthur's a nice man and all.
Hermione's parents being so... so like that brought tears to my eyes, and the rings just made me so happy.
And they're doing it! :D Orchids was a very nice pick for the flowers too, mmhm.
More more, Lash ;)

[therealsnape]

I actually like your Percy. He's responsible, competent, every inch the canon Percy, but this shows the strong side of his qualities.
And Hermione's parents are lovely.
Hermione’s dad was already back at work on his paper, and that bit of normalcy meant as much to Hermione and Ginny as the rings. such a well-crafted detail.

[lash_larue]

Thank you, you really are unmatched in your ability to find something good to say, ;)

L

[kellychambliss]

I like the way you've complicated the plot by having Ginny and Hermione think out the possible consequences of their decisions here. Hot sex with a dash of reality -- that's how I like my fic.

My favorite line: "We’re muggles, but we’re not blind," Mrs. Granger told her.

[lash_larue]

A dash of reality is about all there is room for here, ;)

I think it safe to say that even in the thoroughly imaginary world of this story, a relationship like this is going to leave some sort of mark.

Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this interminable ramble,
L