And Then [No. 6 Fanfic]

[larouille]

Fandom: No. 6
Title: And Then
Characters: Nezumi, Shion
Rating: K
Words: 830
Summary: This is what glory must look like. Nezumi introspection on witnessing Shion's scream.
Prompt: 30. never look back
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.and then

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and after the storm

i run and run as the rains come

and i look up

i look up

on my knees and out of luck

i look up

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Up above, on some wild and

Comments

[anoesism]

This was... so beautiful. I have nothing more apt to describe it. Absolutely beautiful.

[larouille]

Eeeee, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, I'm always so nervous posting to a new fandom. ^^;

[tohru7]

That was amazing! Great job getting into Nezumi's psyche like that :)
I hope to read more of your work XD

[larouille]

Thank you so much! And yes, do expect much more from me for this fandom, I'm so in love with it right now. xD

[rurin]

This was so beautiful...!
I can't say much more, but it's just so easy to understand and not understand and yeah, put yourself into Nezumi's place.
I love how you put the whole "your majesty"-stuff Nezumi uses later to a whole new level, I mean, it'd be less teasing if Nezumi really compared Shion's cry to what he does in your fic. ;;

[larouille]

Oh gosh, thank you so much! I'm really happy that you picked that little detail up, I always love hearing reader's feedback on certain parts like that. Thanks again! <3

[extraordinary]

D'awww, Nezumi. ♥

This was lovely~! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of your writing! =)

[larouille]

Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! <3

[k1m333]

Very interesting, and lovely fic. I can't seem to find the words to say why I liked it so much, but I did. So thanks for sharing. It's a beautiful piece of writing.

[larouille]

Thank you so very much! I really appreciate your kind words. <3