[nano] finisssssshhhhhed

Nov 30, 2010 21:39

Finished NaNo (Over 13K tonight; still not as bad as 2008). Have Golden Sun: Dark Dawn. Guess what I'll be doing? =D

And for a snippet of how bad my writing degraded to during the last bits:
She takes Morrison away from where Byrne and Colum are fighting. Morrison tells her that Byrne is way too dangerous to live, and that the Gray Ghost must eliminate him. Lenore is all, "What? No way! He's my brother!", but Morrison's like, "Well, your brother just tried to kill me, and he's freakishly strong. I want the Gray Ghost over here right fucking now, yo."

Lenore is all protesting and complaining, because, yeah, Byrne's a douche, but just because he's a douche doesn't mean he has to pay for it with his life! Although, okay, Lenore, I know he's your brother and all, but come on. The kid ain't sane. None of you are, though. INSANITY EXCUSES POOR PLOT PLANNING. I LIKE THE ALLITERATION.

Morrison is demanding that Lenore go get the Gray Ghost for him. Lenore is saying no, and then Noverus appears out of fucking nowhere! Dude is totally creepy, just to reiterate.

Noverus tells Morrison to hold his horses about getting the Gray Ghost to assassinate Byrne, because Noverus thinks that it should be interesting for the two wielders of the Goddess cursed/blessed weapons to go at one another's throats. That, and he is a dickweed. Lenore is not impressed, and thinks to herself, "Oh my God. I am so totally going to kill the shit out of you one day." She doesn't say it, though, because she isn't stupid, but she certainly thinks it.

Noverus then tells her that she is a bad girl for not telling anyone that Byrne found such a powerful thing and told no one about it. He then congratulates her for somehow not giving into the same urges she once felt when near Obsidian. He calls her some patronizing shit, and Lenore gets really pissed. This is a running theme in the story. Noverus pisses people off! Bad things happen.

PULITZER MATERIAL. Yeah, I know it's more summary than story. I DON'T CARE.

i hate writing, nanowrimo

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